The Last Visit
A dying old cowboy story.33 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This contest entry is perfect in every way. The count is spot on, the rhyming is perfectly done, the flow is great and the content is a story. Excellent
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This contest entry is perfect in every way. The count is spot on, the rhyming is perfectly done, the flow is great and the content is a story. Excellent
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Barb, you humble me. Thank you for such a wonderful review and shiny six stars.
Comment from JLR
I love a great western show or movie. You created a wonderful scene with delightful character and period themes. Loved it! Thank you for sharing and good success.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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I love a great western show or movie. You created a wonderful scene with delightful character and period themes. Loved it! Thank you for sharing and good success.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your fantastic review and the great six stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun write here Willie, I loved the dialect and the warm sentiments of these old cowboys reaching their final journey and saying their last goodbyes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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A fun write here Willie, I loved the dialect and the warm sentiments of these old cowboys reaching their final journey and saying their last goodbyes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars.
