Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Reflections "Colors of each of the 4
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a vision here and I have seen fish in warmer climates swimming together as you describe, I wish you luck with the contest Trisha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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You created a vision here and I have seen fish in warmer climates swimming together as you describe, I wish you luck with the contest Trisha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Don?t laugh. I should write a ?how to? for not winning contests! I do appreciate the good luck wishes and review!
Comment from QC Poet
It seems as I rated this before, at any rate it is an enjoyable poem to read and review.. The picture you included with your posting goes very well with your Alliteration and creative 5-7-5.
Good Luck in the contest if entered. Blessings.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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It seems as I rated this before, at any rate it is an enjoyable poem to read and review.. The picture you included with your posting goes very well with your Alliteration and creative 5-7-5.
Good Luck in the contest if entered. Blessings.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your kind comments and I?m glad you enjoyed my Haiku
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from N. Rabwar
I liked the use of alliteration and visual imagery in this short poem. Your image is evocative and matches the mood your piece conveys. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I liked the use of alliteration and visual imagery in this short poem. Your image is evocative and matches the mood your piece conveys. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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There?s tough great competition out there! I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct line and syllable count. Lots of alliteration swimming around in this one. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct line and syllable count. Lots of alliteration swimming around in this one. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from rama devi
Superb silvery moonshine alliteration in this fine 5-7-5. Nice imagery. Lovely presentation. Fine flow. All those S sounds make super phonic sonic resonance ..finely enhanced by consonance of L (in silvery, scaled, social and shoals) and H (in shine and shimmering and shoals) and consonance of M as well (in shimmering moonbeams and swim). You've braided together the sounds so well. I loved reading this aloud!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Superb silvery moonshine alliteration in this fine 5-7-5. Nice imagery. Lovely presentation. Fine flow. All those S sounds make super phonic sonic resonance ..finely enhanced by consonance of L (in silvery, scaled, social and shoals) and H (in shine and shimmering and shoals) and consonance of M as well (in shimmering moonbeams and swim). You've braided together the sounds so well. I loved reading this aloud!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Your lovely review was a late night surprise, and I thank you, Rama. I am delighted you gleaned that much pleasure from my poem
Hugs, Trisha
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Comment from Cindy Warren
They do that, don't they? Even in my aquarium, the fish swim in little groups. They're very social, and they're fun to watch. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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They do that, don't they? Even in my aquarium, the fish swim in little groups. They're very social, and they're fun to watch. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and the good wishes.
Hugs, Trisha
