"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Summer of 69 (A)"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
4 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
"Especially when it comes to the suicide rate of young females?"
"Is on the rise and now considered the third worst killer behind car accidents and heroin overdoses.
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This is a sad statistic, my friend`Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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"Especially when it comes to the suicide rate of young females?"
"Is on the rise and now considered the third worst killer behind car accidents and heroin overdoses.
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This is a sad statistic, my friend`Debbie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your time and review Debbie and have a wonderful day.
Ricky
Comment from Lulube
Well I had a bit of a freak out when I first read, Lori? But I read on and you actually put her last name out there. whew!! We hadn't met in '69 and I had forgotten. My name is Lori, right spelling too. lol But for the poem, you really spill out your pain throughout, for the loss of this love that just disappeared without a following letter. what young person can see that this is what would have been the best way to say goodbye. it doesn't leave the other one wondering the rest of their life what had happened. People can be so callous and selfish. If it doesn't concern their feelings too bad for the other one. I found this piece a bit long and repeated a bit too much. You could have made this into at least three separate poems, finding the same pain passages to make them up. However, the repeating only shows how much the words have been locked up and I hope you are feeling better for it. Our young loves last for a long time, until we grow old enough to shake it off and laugh at the misrepresented love we thought we felt for lust and crushes.
remember the good times but let go of the hurt you went through.
lulube
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Well I had a bit of a freak out when I first read, Lori? But I read on and you actually put her last name out there. whew!! We hadn't met in '69 and I had forgotten. My name is Lori, right spelling too. lol But for the poem, you really spill out your pain throughout, for the loss of this love that just disappeared without a following letter. what young person can see that this is what would have been the best way to say goodbye. it doesn't leave the other one wondering the rest of their life what had happened. People can be so callous and selfish. If it doesn't concern their feelings too bad for the other one. I found this piece a bit long and repeated a bit too much. You could have made this into at least three separate poems, finding the same pain passages to make them up. However, the repeating only shows how much the words have been locked up and I hope you are feeling better for it. Our young loves last for a long time, until we grow old enough to shake it off and laugh at the misrepresented love we thought we felt for lust and crushes.
remember the good times but let go of the hurt you went through.
lulube
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Where were you Lori in 69?
This Lori had fantastic legs little bit of a rounded nose everything was in order though.
LOL!
Ricky
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Vancouver area BC 5foot one inch, long hair
lol
lulube
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a very vivid and loving yet at the same time heart-breaking offering for the day, Ricky -- you have certainly poured your heart through your pen on this one! ;) Thank you for sharing such feelings with us all! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Such a very vivid and loving yet at the same time heart-breaking offering for the day, Ricky -- you have certainly poured your heart through your pen on this one! ;) Thank you for sharing such feelings with us all! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thanks Yvonne. Ricky
And have a wonderful day!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
WOW! You are truly an inspired romantic at hear, my friend. This is just a beautiful read ('ve read it about eight times now and each time take away something new). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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WOW! You are truly an inspired romantic at hear, my friend. This is just a beautiful read ('ve read it about eight times now and each time take away something new). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thanks Mystic Angel forever yours and have a wonderful day!
Ricky....