Achievement:Intensity of CAN!
Yea, I CAN, such say-er succeeds...53 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your encouraging reflections along with the clever reinforcing picture. I enjoyed your addition of rhymes in these quatrains. I will make "I can" be my new mantra! I hope your poem was well received in last year's contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging reflections along with the clever reinforcing picture. I enjoyed your addition of rhymes in these quatrains. I will make "I can" be my new mantra! I hope your poem was well received in last year's contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Joan,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
Special THANKS for taking time to read this poem, and for LOVELY words. Actually Laudable!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Earl Corp
Excellent entry into the I Can contest. Your poem hit all four of the criteria I use to rate poetry on. It rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Excellent entry into the I Can contest. Your poem hit all four of the criteria I use to rate poetry on. It rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hello Earl Corp,
Thank you very much for your so detailed, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING Review backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Loren .
Strong writing that seems to literally jump off the page into the reader's heart and soul. All things must begin with this commitment then belief and finally perseverance. Best of luck in the contest. Loren
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Strong writing that seems to literally jump off the page into the reader's heart and soul. All things must begin with this commitment then belief and finally perseverance. Best of luck in the contest. Loren
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hello Fulton / Loren,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from robyn corum
RPS,
It's sad but true. If you believe you can or believe you can't, you're probably right. The old adage holds true, no matter how old I grow to be. Thanks for this post on cans and can'ts.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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RPS,
It's sad but true. If you believe you can or believe you can't, you're probably right. The old adage holds true, no matter how old I grow to be. Thanks for this post on cans and can'ts.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Robyn corum,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
with best words,
~ RP
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think when we set our minds to something we can most definitely do it. What kills me is when someone tries to knock down what you're doing. When I told people I was writing a book there were so many who looked at me like I was crazy and I wasn't actually going to do it. Well, who's laughing now. lol.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I think when we set our minds to something we can most definitely do it. What kills me is when someone tries to knock down what you're doing. When I told people I was writing a book there were so many who looked at me like I was crazy and I wasn't actually going to do it. Well, who's laughing now. lol.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Experiencing Liphe,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS - "I think...laughing now." - MARVELOUS!
with best words,
~ RP
Comment from Lulube
I can, I can, I can. A pumped up, go getter poem. almost a speech but in rhyme. those that say I can are those that try. the others don't try, they go nowhere. uplifting, thxs for sharing
lulube
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I can, I can, I can. A pumped up, go getter poem. almost a speech but in rhyme. those that say I can are those that try. the others don't try, they go nowhere. uplifting, thxs for sharing
lulube
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Lulube,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
with best words,
~ RP
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Badger_29
I gave this 6 because it was such an odd sense of meter and rhyming that it was an example of I can because some people may say you can't do it that way. A very inspiring write, one that places emphasis on the fact that through faith and a good attitude that we can accomplish anything that we put our minds to. I like it because I've spent all my life achieving every goal but I've ever set for myself so I could reflect and associate with this attitude of I can. The positivity that flows through this is something that I have felt, as I don't set reasonable goals for myself yet, at the same time have lofty dreams. A great write, very unusual that's what I liked most about it -it's eccentric air.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I gave this 6 because it was such an odd sense of meter and rhyming that it was an example of I can because some people may say you can't do it that way. A very inspiring write, one that places emphasis on the fact that through faith and a good attitude that we can accomplish anything that we put our minds to. I like it because I've spent all my life achieving every goal but I've ever set for myself so I could reflect and associate with this attitude of I can. The positivity that flows through this is something that I have felt, as I don't set reasonable goals for myself yet, at the same time have lofty dreams. A great write, very unusual that's what I liked most about it -it's eccentric air.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Badger29 / Darren,
Thank you very much for your so nice and detailed Review - from the beginning to the end - MARVELOUS!
Please accept my HEARTFELT THANKS for your so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by most coveted SIX STARS + Blessings.
with best words,
~ RP
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I'm so happy that I could brighten your day, as you certainly Brighton to Mine by your response. Furthermore, I found out but it's a contest and you fit the format perfectly blessings to you.
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha, such a clever poem you've penned my friend, and sage advice for anyone with a negative mindset. "I can" opens many doors and broadens horizons.
Bet of luck with the judges.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Ha, such a clever poem you've penned my friend, and sage advice for anyone with a negative mindset. "I can" opens many doors and broadens horizons.
Bet of luck with the judges.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Ideasaregems-Dawn,
Thank you very much for you so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from BeasPeas
The last stanza to your "I Can" poem holds the key as to whether we succeed or not. Good rhyming throughout with positive message. Nicely illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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The last stanza to your "I Can" poem holds the key as to whether we succeed or not. Good rhyming throughout with positive message. Nicely illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Marilyn,
Thank you very much for you so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Boogienights
What you say is very true, and you have expressed this idea very well in your nicely written poem. So many times I have failed by thinking I can't do something, and I usually fail as I thought. It's all about attitude. Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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What you say is very true, and you have expressed this idea very well in your nicely written poem. So many times I have failed by thinking I can't do something, and I usually fail as I thought. It's all about attitude. Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed this!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Boogienights,
Thank you very much for you so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
