Oh, good Grief -Version 1
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Oh, Good Grief V1 Part two."A complete look at grief and grief support.
4 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Mike, I'm giving you 5 stars, but that doesn't mean I reviewed. It is entirely too long which is why you aren't getting reviews. I read one of your other pieces and it was well done. Break this into 2 or probably 3 pieces and you should get some real reviews, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Mike, I'm giving you 5 stars, but that doesn't mean I reviewed. It is entirely too long which is why you aren't getting reviews. I read one of your other pieces and it was well done. Break this into 2 or probably 3 pieces and you should get some real reviews, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I appreciate your comments, but it is a stand alone work and already broken down into two parts. If Fanstory wants that type of money from me, I have to be better accommodated.
With this type of work, I generally am not worried about the number of reviews, but am very happy over those few that take the time and effort to review my work.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read and flowed well with no Grammar issues as well...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
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While, Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
And have a Blessed Sunday.
Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read and flowed well with no Grammar issues as well...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
...
While, Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
And have a Blessed Sunday.
Ricky
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I thank you very much for this review and hope the week ahead holds its blessings. -Mike
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read and flowed well with no Grammar issues as well...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
...
While, Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
And have a Blessed Sunday.
Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read and flowed well with no Grammar issues as well...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
...
While, Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
And have a Blessed Sunday.
Ricky
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I thank you very much for reviewing this. Mike
Comment from Cindy Warren
It doesn't matter how old the grief is. She was special, and you loved her. Your life was richer for having known her. Here's an odd coincidence. I had an aunt named Jean Murphy. She lived into her 90's.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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It doesn't matter how old the grief is. She was special, and you loved her. Your life was richer for having known her. Here's an odd coincidence. I had an aunt named Jean Murphy. She lived into her 90's.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Wow! Really appreciate you sharing your recollections of your family. I thank you for the review and encouragement.
