A Woodland Rite
A Villanelle for Potlatch Poetry32 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
You capture the wonder of seeing the fairies dancing. Excellent description of the setting and the narrator's feelings upon seeing the fairies. It's understandable that one would be frozen to the spot, whether because of fright or wonder. Very effective that you emphasized the moonlight. it makes the scene more vivid, and the lighting would add to the eerie feeling. Great work with the villanelle. judi
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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You capture the wonder of seeing the fairies dancing. Excellent description of the setting and the narrator's feelings upon seeing the fairies. It's understandable that one would be frozen to the spot, whether because of fright or wonder. Very effective that you emphasized the moonlight. it makes the scene more vivid, and the lighting would add to the eerie feeling. Great work with the villanelle. judi
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Judi, for this wonderful review.
Yvonne
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You're quite welcome. judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine Villanelle and they are not easy to write and your flows like a dream and I enjoyed your woodland reverie here filled with moonlight, albeit eerie! Much enjoyed, well metered and rhymed, Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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This is a fine Villanelle and they are not easy to write and your flows like a dream and I enjoyed your woodland reverie here filled with moonlight, albeit eerie! Much enjoyed, well metered and rhymed, Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thank you for a great review, Dolly.
Yvonne
