Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I really like the message in this well-crafted senryu, and I like your choice of artwork. And, you're right ... once injurious words are spoken, the 'damage is done.'
This is a great contest entry, and I truly wish you the very best.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019

Thanks for reviewing! We always remember how people made us feel, even if no blood is drawn.

Comment from Six-Star Writer

Excellent

The idea of words hurting someone has been way over done. Likening them to barbs or swords is nothing new whatsoever. I'd rather see more of an example of how words can hurt people. Nothing novel here.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019

Thanks for having a look anyway.
I figured I had used examples of how words can hurt: by using the word barbs, as in taunts and mean-spirited language, by speaking sharply, by using spiteful, pointed remarks.

reply by Six-Star Writer on 28-Jul-2019

You did. But the words and concepts are played. It's phoning it in. But you're not alone in this, as that's what the majority of people do here. Anyway, have a nice day. Starbucks time.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

An excellent senryu, my friend and it definitely speaks the truth. The satori line is great. Best wishes in thecontest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019

Thanks for your review and comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You are so right, (be impeccable in your word) is the best advice I have been given, all too often we say or write something that hurts without realising it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019

Thanks for reviewing, Dolly. It's hard to remedy a hurt inflicted unknowingly - some people can be overly sensitive, but a hurt inflicted on purpose is a terrible thing.