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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Rain on a tin roof"Poems not in other books
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a poem written from someone who knows what it's like to wait for rain and then the wonderful sound of listening to it when it finally comes. Nice one Craig,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This is a poem written from someone who knows what it's like to wait for rain and then the wonderful sound of listening to it when it finally comes. Nice one Craig,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hasn't been coming often enough in these parts of late, Valda. Thanks once again, Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Craig. Nicely done. There is something cozy about that sound. Most people feel that way about it. A well written 15 syllable poem. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi Craig. Nicely done. There is something cozy about that sound. Most people feel that way about it. A well written 15 syllable poem. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the good luck wishes and kind comments, Marilyn. Cheers, Craig
Comment from --Turtle.
Hey, Craig,
I read through your 15 syllable poem
A pleasing arrangement, with a feel-good effect. Solid imagery, and with a simple but effective close, reminding me that poetry does not have to be dripping with overages to strum the cords of existence.
We've had a lot of rain in my area this year, and I smiled at the way my life experiences took this poem's words.
Last time I was under a metal roof for a rainstorm, I was at work, and I stopped to pause and listen. I'd reflected on the sound, and my bitter-sweet relation with being employed there... when it rains it pours. But at that moment, life was good... things were working, and though that could change at any moment, given our current climate, I still was working, so I'd thought, ah... that pouring sound, sounds so good.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Hey, Craig,
I read through your 15 syllable poem
A pleasing arrangement, with a feel-good effect. Solid imagery, and with a simple but effective close, reminding me that poetry does not have to be dripping with overages to strum the cords of existence.
We've had a lot of rain in my area this year, and I smiled at the way my life experiences took this poem's words.
Last time I was under a metal roof for a rainstorm, I was at work, and I stopped to pause and listen. I'd reflected on the sound, and my bitter-sweet relation with being employed there... when it rains it pours. But at that moment, life was good... things were working, and though that could change at any moment, given our current climate, I still was working, so I'd thought, ah... that pouring sound, sounds so good.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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You're lucky to have had plenty, Turtle. We've had less than normal this year, and normal isn't enough. Alas, this poem was more a wishful dream than based in fact (but life is pretty good anyway, it just would be better with some rain).
I hope you remain in your current job as long as you want to.
Most grateful for your wonderful comments. I feel I should say that when I see your name, I have come to expect a thoughtful, helpful and encouraging review, but that doesn't mean that it's in the slightest taken for granted.
Cheers,
Craig
Comment from Y. M. Roger
You know, many may not understand this one, but I can so relate, Craig!! ;) ;) Such a wonderful offering that offers the reader sight, sound, and even comfort -- great job in only 15 syllables! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
P.S. Good to hear from you, sir!! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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You know, many may not understand this one, but I can so relate, Craig!! ;) ;) Such a wonderful offering that offers the reader sight, sound, and even comfort -- great job in only 15 syllables! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
P.S. Good to hear from you, sir!! ;) ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, Yvette. Your encouragement is very uplifting :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from rama devi
I love the sound of rain on roof, and a tin roof gives it a fine percussive effect! Well worded. Life is good for sure...
Fine entry. Good luck, my friend.
You'll have noticed I am not reviewing often. Been busy and also traveling. Will visit FS on occasion.
Blessings,
rd
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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I love the sound of rain on roof, and a tin roof gives it a fine percussive effect! Well worded. Life is good for sure...
Fine entry. Good luck, my friend.
You'll have noticed I am not reviewing often. Been busy and also traveling. Will visit FS on occasion.
Blessings,
rd
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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It's always a pleasure to find you've had the chance to review a post, RD. Thanks for the lovely words of encouragement. Safe travels, and I hope you're finding some time for your own creations on those long flights :) Cheers, Craig
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Thanks, my dear friend. I've not been writing much lately. Very busy editing novels. But I might write one soon.
I just don't have time to post and reply much!
Warmly, rd
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
rain on a tin roof
sweet music from above
my life is good
And anyone who has had the opportunity to enjoy this sound, knows just what you mean. 15 syllables
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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rain on a tin roof
sweet music from above
my life is good
And anyone who has had the opportunity to enjoy this sound, knows just what you mean. 15 syllables
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated :) craig
Comment from lyenochka
That must be especially like music to your ears if you haven't heard rain in a while. We get rain most of the year but I do like the pitter-patter rhythm of rain especially at night. Great job with the haiku-like poem, Craig!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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That must be especially like music to your ears if you haven't heard rain in a while. We get rain most of the year but I do like the pitter-patter rhythm of rain especially at night. Great job with the haiku-like poem, Craig!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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You're very lucky indeed to get so much rain, Helen. Thanks for the lovely review :) Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
You did it, Craig. You created a sweet mood with your fifteen syllables. That's what it's all about to me. Sometimes I get lost in the word plays and sounds. You kept your eye on the prize for sure.
I hope you win with this one. I really like it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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You did it, Craig. You created a sweet mood with your fifteen syllables. That's what it's all about to me. Sometimes I get lost in the word plays and sounds. You kept your eye on the prize for sure.
I hope you win with this one. I really like it.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Debbie. I really appreciate the great encouragement. Cheers, Craig.
Comment from Gloria ....
Like you I also enjoy the sound of rain on a tin roof, as long as it doesn't go on for months. LOL
Love this and here's hoping the Contest Committee does too.
Thanks for the sweet music.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Like you I also enjoy the sound of rain on a tin roof, as long as it doesn't go on for months. LOL
Love this and here's hoping the Contest Committee does too.
Thanks for the sweet music.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much, Gloria. Most appreciated :)
Not much chance of it going on for hours in these parts, let alone months, unfortunately.
Cheers,
Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the rain sounds on a tin roof that is a priceless Symphony that I also enjoyed in my childhood. Now, we have tile roofs that mostly dampens the sound of rain.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the rain sounds on a tin roof that is a priceless Symphony that I also enjoyed in my childhood. Now, we have tile roofs that mostly dampens the sound of rain.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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It's definitely not the same for those who have tiled roofs, Sandra. Thanks for the kind words, Craig
