Timeless Refrain
The music of the ages through creation and man...35 total reviews
Comment from royowen
They are very randy creatures the cicadas are Yvette, when springtime comes a young man's thoughts turn to...and grasshoppers, and birds, we'll dine Yvette, beautifully written good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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They are very randy creatures the cicadas are Yvette, when springtime comes a young man's thoughts turn to...and grasshoppers, and birds, we'll dine Yvette, beautifully written good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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You may be the only one that saw the connection from the first to second part of this one, sir!! The outside and the inside on a summer day! ;) ; ) Thanx for the review, Mr. Insightful (wink, wink), and take care down/under there! ;) ;) Yvette
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You too dear girl.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written Tanka poem with truly lovely imagery from the art work you chose. You used great descriptive words also my friend. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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This is a very beautifully written Tanka poem with truly lovely imagery from the art work you chose. You used great descriptive words also my friend. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my tanka offering, Teri -- was another of the 'front porch offerings' for the week! ;) LOL! ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette. Cicadas are the din of summer. When the sun goes down their song comes up. A few summers ago my wife and I were leaving parking lot and she said to me, "The trees are teeming with life." I love the sound of them. Z
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Hey Yvette. Cicadas are the din of summer. When the sun goes down their song comes up. A few summers ago my wife and I were leaving parking lot and she said to me, "The trees are teeming with life." I love the sound of them. Z
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Wouldn't trade their sound for anything, Z, they are my relaxation noise machine and my reminder that it's not cold yet! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by on this one, sir!! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome.
Comment from Joan E.
What an eye-appealing, color presentation and ear-appealing use of alliteration in the tanka! I enjoyed your pivot line as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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What an eye-appealing, color presentation and ear-appealing use of alliteration in the tanka! I enjoyed your pivot line as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my tanka offering, Joan -- was another of the 'front porch offerings' for the week! ;) LOL! ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from DonandVicki
When I was growing up in Northern Ohio, I would love to lay in bed at night and let the cicada's song sing me into a meditative state until I drifted off to sleep.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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When I was growing up in Northern Ohio, I would love to lay in bed at night and let the cicada's song sing me into a meditative state until I drifted off to sleep.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one -- take care out there! ;) Yvette
