"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "From the Inner to the Outer."A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Earl Corp
This has a kind of pep talk on how to get to heaven feel about it because all roads leading to Heaven do go through Jesus Christ. Did you mean art with me instead of areth?
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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This has a kind of pep talk on how to get to heaven feel about it because all roads leading to Heaven do go through Jesus Christ. Did you mean art with me instead of areth?
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Just using old English.
Thanks Earl.
Ricky 1024
Comment from Kenia Suarez
This is a well written poem. I only see one typo in the fifth paragraph. I think it should say very instead of gery. It flows well and rhymes well too.
It is full of emotion and one can feel the pain as you read it. Sorry for your lost and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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This is a well written poem. I only see one typo in the fifth paragraph. I think it should say very instead of gery. It flows well and rhymes well too.
It is full of emotion and one can feel the pain as you read it. Sorry for your lost and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Thanks and corrected.
Ricky
Comment from Neonewman
Another great piece you have offered us, Ricky. I can only imagine the horror and pain you have experienced. I can't imagine being strong enough to put such pain to paper. Your strength is absolutely commendable.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Another great piece you have offered us, Ricky. I can only imagine the horror and pain you have experienced. I can't imagine being strong enough to put such pain to paper. Your strength is absolutely commendable.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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I don't even as a parent yourself you will know parent's worst nightmare is the Lost especially for you and me of our make Son.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
so, so, gery hard to forget the misery and the pains." (very)
Ricky, this is a very moving poem about the tragic loss of your son, my friend. Much emotion is expressed~Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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so, so, gery hard to forget the misery and the pains." (very)
Ricky, this is a very moving poem about the tragic loss of your son, my friend. Much emotion is expressed~Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Gery right.
Corrected that on my first review.
Ricky.
Comment from JLR
Writer, you convey the on-going lesson: of the life of Christ being the beginning and the end of the rainbow. The small still thin veil we transverse to the everlasting new beginning. Well crafted, honest, palpable... thank you!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Writer, you convey the on-going lesson: of the life of Christ being the beginning and the end of the rainbow. The small still thin veil we transverse to the everlasting new beginning. Well crafted, honest, palpable... thank you!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Always my pleasure JLR.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
We're missing the body of the test again, sweetie. I hate to see you lose funny money over empty packages like this so please be careful. HUGS & BLESSINGS always.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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We're missing the body of the test again, sweetie. I hate to see you lose funny money over empty packages like this so please be careful. HUGS & BLESSINGS always.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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I just can't close a beautiful gift inside for you my love!
Ricky