And the Wet Shall Inherit
A picture for posterity14 total reviews
Comment from Sara R.
I enjoyed reading this. Matter of fact, it put a smile on my face. I don't believe these things are true, but in your case, I hope this is a true story and you are enjoying your million dollars. This is a happy poem for sure.
Sara R.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed reading this. Matter of fact, it put a smile on my face. I don't believe these things are true, but in your case, I hope this is a true story and you are enjoying your million dollars. This is a happy poem for sure.
Sara R.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Oh, boy! I wish it were - except for the robe bit, but many thanks for your kind words. They are much appreciated.
Comment from Gail Denham
Ha! First of all - congrats are in order for winning that flighty prize - and the bathrobe bit is funny. Makes me think of one of Erma Bombeck's stories (I think it was her or maybe Joyce Maynard) - anyway they did their exercises in the all-together in front of the kitchen window. Suddenly Erma looks up to see an astonished mail man. Still makes me laugh.
Fun poem
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Ha! First of all - congrats are in order for winning that flighty prize - and the bathrobe bit is funny. Makes me think of one of Erma Bombeck's stories (I think it was her or maybe Joyce Maynard) - anyway they did their exercises in the all-together in front of the kitchen window. Suddenly Erma looks up to see an astonished mail man. Still makes me laugh.
Fun poem
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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well, of course, that wasn't moi! Wish it had been - except for the robe bit. Friends tease me for trying to win the stupid thing, but then they buy lottery tickets...
thanks for you fun and very nice review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Loved your artwork. It pairs wonderfully well with this poem. I also liked the hilariously funny plot twist at the end. When they finally bring my big check I hope to not be in my bathrobe. But like you said if it's not Brad Pitt "what the heck." I'd collect my money too; with or without underwear! Engaging narrative. Well crafted. Good job!
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Loved your artwork. It pairs wonderfully well with this poem. I also liked the hilariously funny plot twist at the end. When they finally bring my big check I hope to not be in my bathrobe. But like you said if it's not Brad Pitt "what the heck." I'd collect my money too; with or without underwear! Engaging narrative. Well crafted. Good job!
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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many thanks for your neat review. I really appreciate your kind words!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. Good rhyme, east to understand with some comedy thrown in.
Having won all that money, I would care less about what happened to my bathrobe. Very good work, throw open the robe.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Excellent. Good rhyme, east to understand with some comedy thrown in.
Having won all that money, I would care less about what happened to my bathrobe. Very good work, throw open the robe.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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well, Mr. Smith, you left me laughing. AND most appreciative of the 6 lovely stars. My friends tease me because I have been trying to win the PCH millions for years (instead of buying lottery tickets), so this was a fantasy write. (except for the robe business) :)
