Ode to a Lifelong Friend
Always there for me no matter the time of day...18 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This concise piece pays a rousing tribute to the bath tub--whose warm
waters, soothing oils, and privacy enable us to exit that lovely world more equipped to face the one on the other side of the door!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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This concise piece pays a rousing tribute to the bath tub--whose warm
waters, soothing oils, and privacy enable us to exit that lovely world more equipped to face the one on the other side of the door!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Yes! Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to the bath-tub that is our escape every day from the normal household activities when we can relax all alone in an aromatic foam bath.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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A very well-written ode to the bath-tub that is our escape every day from the normal household activities when we can relax all alone in an aromatic foam bath.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Angie Dent
What better item to create an ode to! I also love a bath and I like the way you made the reader think it was a favourite person to start with. I think I will go for a bath now... : )
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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What better item to create an ode to! I also love a bath and I like the way you made the reader think it was a favourite person to start with. I think I will go for a bath now... : )
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Great poem to your tub. I'm glad another person besides me who write poetry about things. I once wrote a poem about the different uses for a stairway. It doesn't take much to impress me at times.
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Great poem to your tub. I'm glad another person besides me who write poetry about things. I once wrote a poem about the different uses for a stairway. It doesn't take much to impress me at times.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!!
Comment from Neonewman
Ha!
What a fun little piece you have crafted to perfection. Love the twist and using the bathtub as your muse for this particular writing prompt.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Ha!
What a fun little piece you have crafted to perfection. Love the twist and using the bathtub as your muse for this particular writing prompt.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh to have a long soak and be soothed before bedtime! This is an ode to the tub, a place where we unwind and contemplate the days events, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Oh to have a long soak and be soothed before bedtime! This is an ode to the tub, a place where we unwind and contemplate the days events, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!!
Comment from kahpot
Yes the tub, one of the most relaxing and when desired private times alone, the second line of the second couplet made me stumble with the flow " from the brink time and ag'in" it might be just me but this didn't seem to flow as well as the rest, a wonderful ode poem and entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Yes the tub, one of the most relaxing and when desired private times alone, the second line of the second couplet made me stumble with the flow " from the brink time and ag'in" it might be just me but this didn't seem to flow as well as the rest, a wonderful ode poem and entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the heads up...I was a bit concerned about that so I changed the 'abbreviation punctuation' and added a note... Your input is appreciated!
Comment from juliaSjames
The photo did give the game away but the twist still made me smile.
An expertly written and constructed ode to the delights of bathtime, soaking in a tub. Ahhh such relaxation!
Best wishes for the contest. This should do well.
Blessings Julia
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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The photo did give the game away but the twist still made me smile.
An expertly written and constructed ode to the delights of bathtime, soaking in a tub. Ahhh such relaxation!
Best wishes for the contest. This should do well.
Blessings Julia
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review!!
