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After the Storm

An Alliterisen Poem Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from HarryT
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Great job on this alliteration. Love the images created and especially the last line. The flow and pacing was excellent. Enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this piece. It was a fun challenge. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
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Loved your poem, the thought behind it and the alliterative phrasing you came up with. Very soothing indeed. The only nit is that "envelopes every part" has only six syllables, not the required seven. Well done in all other aspects. - Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
    Thank you for reading and giving me a heads up on the six syllables. I have revised it and think it actually flows more smoothly now. I appreciate your honest review.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
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When all fails, our worries are dismissed for a moment by the wonders of nature and the beauty of the earth. Very nicely written. Wishing you the best in your contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    Thank you for sharing your insightful sentiments.
Comment from LisaMay
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This poem beautifully sets the scene of arriving and soaking in tranquility after a storm, feeling soothed - then the business of forgiving and eventually forgetting can be attended to.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
    Thank you for sharing your insightful review.