"Painted Visions"
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Comment from Lulube
A vdry deep, soul searching thoughts of the pain you still endure. Still you cry out to God for an answer to ease your breaking heart. But no comfort that I feel you have received, other than survival detours that still leave you questioning. Put those questions to rest for there will be no direct answer but an open awareness of your own life style may be seen and redirected to find some joy and happiness in the present, for it is what it is.
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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A vdry deep, soul searching thoughts of the pain you still endure. Still you cry out to God for an answer to ease your breaking heart. But no comfort that I feel you have received, other than survival detours that still leave you questioning. Put those questions to rest for there will be no direct answer but an open awareness of your own life style may be seen and redirected to find some joy and happiness in the present, for it is what it is.
lulube
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thanks for that Lulube.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Diana L Crawford
When I wrote one of my poems for a contest (Which I cannot share info on), I made comments in the notes that were especially meant for someone like you. I lost my father many years ago to suicide, and just like you write in this piece - so many questions and no real answers. It was especially difficult, because my father was an alcoholic and throughout my life he lived here and he live there. The longing for him as a little girl and young woman was tremendous. The time I was able to spend with him meant so much to my heart; so when he committed suicide, I was so very angry at first. But thankfully the power of forgiveness help to ease that pain. xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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When I wrote one of my poems for a contest (Which I cannot share info on), I made comments in the notes that were especially meant for someone like you. I lost my father many years ago to suicide, and just like you write in this piece - so many questions and no real answers. It was especially difficult, because my father was an alcoholic and throughout my life he lived here and he live there. The longing for him as a little girl and young woman was tremendous. The time I was able to spend with him meant so much to my heart; so when he committed suicide, I was so very angry at first. But thankfully the power of forgiveness help to ease that pain. xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this when you talked about your father dying that way my father didn't send me to also he was a decorated naval Chief and two wars on four destroyers he could beat that but he couldn't beat the bottle.
Ricky
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My 1/2 sister right now sadly walks that road our father did and it is deteriorating her life completely.
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Maybe I can help her hun just give me your first name and tell me a little bit and I'll write her a love poem tell her it's from a wonderful man who's also gone through tragedies of suicides and loss of a child.
Ricky
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Maybe I can help her hun just give me your first name and tell me a little bit and I'll write her a love poem tell her it's from a wonderful man who's also gone through tragedies of suicides and loss of a child.
Ricky
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Her name is Lisa :). Honored that you would be so inspired to write a prayer in a poem for her :)
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"The Discovery of Miss Lisa"
Written on July 22nd, 2019
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
(For Your Eyes Only)
As I suffered through my recent alteration at my surgeon's office today from a catheterization to puncturing me here and there thank God that I'm better off than most people.
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star babies right now crying cuz they're starving all over the world. My
* 60000 human beings in my state New Jersey that will go to sleep with aching valleys tonight.
There are other numerous people who are suffering so in hospitals awaiting human organ the form of Gift of Life.
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We wonder if they were born in progress or educated if this is the way the world was meant to be?
But then again let's not forget the so so much Beauty?
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The beautiful summer lilies as they droop in the rain when droplets of fresh water is if do is what remains.
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many beautiful dragonflies and insects that fly in the sky zigging and zagging trying to catch themselves a little gnat or two before the sun sleeps as it will always do.
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And then back again there's me and you my love.
Though we may suffer to a limited degree it's just another form of God testing you and me.
To strengthen us and then he again lets us on our way.
To teach others to try and enjoy and have another beautiful day.
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"The Discovery of Miss Lisa"
Written on July 22nd, 2019
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
(For Your Eyes Only)
As I suffered through my recent alteration at my surgeon's office today from a catheterization to puncturing me here and there thank God that I'm better off than most people.
...
star babies right now crying cuz they're starving all over the world. My
* 60000 human beings in my state New Jersey that will go to sleep with aching valleys tonight.
There are other numerous people who are suffering so in hospitals awaiting human organ the form of Gift of Life.
...
We wonder if they were born in progress or educated if this is the way the world was meant to be?
But then again let's not forget the so so much Beauty?
...
The beautiful summer lilies as they droop in the rain when droplets of fresh water is if do is what remains.
...
many beautiful dragonflies and insects that fly in the sky zigging and zagging trying to catch themselves a little gnat or two before the sun sleeps as it will always do.
...
And then back again there's me and you my love.
Though we may suffer to a limited degree it's just another form of God testing you and me.
To strengthen us and then he again lets us on our way.
To teach others to try and enjoy and have another beautiful day.
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So beautiful and magical and the wisest of advice! If only all of us could see with such unselfish eyes. Thank you writing this! One day maybe I will be able to share this with my sister. She once wrote poetry herself :).
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
One thing Scarlett NEVER did was let anything get her down - "After all, tomorrow is another day!" :). Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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One thing Scarlett NEVER did was let anything get her down - "After all, tomorrow is another day!" :). Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Thanks for stepping into the Twilight Zone and outer limits of my life.
Ricky