holiday romance
a horror poem2 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Apparently it can happen that easily... a few gins and before you know it you're in the clutches of the devil!!
Joking aside, yes it would be disconcertingly horrifying to notice goat-prints rather than footprints. You set the scene well in your poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Apparently it can happen that easily... a few gins and before you know it you're in the clutches of the devil!!
Joking aside, yes it would be disconcertingly horrifying to notice goat-prints rather than footprints. You set the scene well in your poem.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Ha ha, exactly. Holiday romance is over~rated. I wanted people to read and think oh, judester got the prompt wrong until boom! goat prints! Thanks for the review, cheers.
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I liked that contrast!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you turn the beatific vision into a more menacing portrait at the end. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you turn the beatific vision into a more menacing portrait at the end. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the review. Yeah, gin and handsome men sometimes do not mix. It was a fun write, cheers.
