God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I thank that you wrote another great poem! It is very truthful. I like the line "Birth is a matter of fate." Is my favorite line. We are so fortunate to be chosen to be born. Great poem and thank you for sharing!
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I thank that you wrote another great poem! It is very truthful. I like the line "Birth is a matter of fate." Is my favorite line. We are so fortunate to be chosen to be born. Great poem and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Begin Again
It's all in the hands of God as far as when the hourglass starts and ends. And how we choose to live during that time is up to us to choose the good or the bad. Nice said and I love the chosen artwork. Smiles, Carol
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It's all in the hands of God as far as when the hourglass starts and ends. And how we choose to live during that time is up to us to choose the good or the bad. Nice said and I love the chosen artwork. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Very interesting poem touching upon one of the mysteries of life in four sentences. There is no cure for birth and death and hence we should enjoy life! Birth and death are not two different states, but they are different aspects of the same state. Nothing is in our hands. Thanks for sharing!
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Very interesting poem touching upon one of the mysteries of life in four sentences. There is no cure for birth and death and hence we should enjoy life! Birth and death are not two different states, but they are different aspects of the same state. Nothing is in our hands. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Fact! Fact! Fact! I couldn't agree more. Great imagery and a wonderful message in a poem. You've written well. Many thanks for sharing! Blessings and good health!
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Fact! Fact! Fact! I couldn't agree more. Great imagery and a wonderful message in a poem. You've written well. Many thanks for sharing! Blessings and good health!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow Alcreator!
No notes necessary for me, although I did read them...after I read your poem. I'm like that. Four lines and you've said so much! Is that "Seer"
you? I'm kind of stumped as what else to say about this wisdom you
have presented. It seems simple, yet it is so full of depth.
Thank you so much for sharing,
Anna
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Wow Alcreator!
No notes necessary for me, although I did read them...after I read your poem. I'm like that. Four lines and you've said so much! Is that "Seer"
you? I'm kind of stumped as what else to say about this wisdom you
have presented. It seems simple, yet it is so full of depth.
Thank you so much for sharing,
Anna
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from Boogienights
I like the simplicity of this short free verse poem. Are you referring to Nostradamus? I think I read that somewhere. You make a true statement with this verse, I appreciate that. Thanks for sharing. :)
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I like the simplicity of this short free verse poem. Are you referring to Nostradamus? I think I read that somewhere. You make a true statement with this verse, I appreciate that. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from Pj Dennison
This poem sure speaks the truth. Well, at least in the way I think it does. It's excellent for your first poem. I hope you continue to write and to express yourself. The reviews can be tough sometimes but they are valuable lessons from experienced writers. Read some of the best stories and poems here as it will give you some ideas and techniques. Keep on writing!
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This poem sure speaks the truth. Well, at least in the way I think it does. It's excellent for your first poem. I hope you continue to write and to express yourself. The reviews can be tough sometimes but they are valuable lessons from experienced writers. Read some of the best stories and poems here as it will give you some ideas and techniques. Keep on writing!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written poem. Birth is a matter of fate. Death is a matter of time. Nice presentation background colour and font. Great photo to compliment your words.
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This is a Nicely written poem. Birth is a matter of fate. Death is a matter of time. Nice presentation background colour and font. Great photo to compliment your words.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well presented perspective on the the significance of one's behaviour and how it impacts on one's memorability. Actions speak volumes. Nicely composed, message resonates effectively.
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A well presented perspective on the the significance of one's behaviour and how it impacts on one's memorability. Actions speak volumes. Nicely composed, message resonates effectively.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your four line poem summed up man's life well. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Your lines flow well with good imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your four line poem summed up man's life well. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Your lines flow well with good imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
