God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from Xenia Escobar
Simple yet powerful. Each line has more truth than the last. They follow a pattern, they follow each other. "Birth is a matter of fate" is my favorite line because it's true. Death follows eventually and in between the two are memories of a life well lived.
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Simple yet powerful. Each line has more truth than the last. They follow a pattern, they follow each other. "Birth is a matter of fate" is my favorite line because it's true. Death follows eventually and in between the two are memories of a life well lived.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello ALD, an interesting four lines. I agree that birth is a matter of fate and death is just a matter of time for us all. As for memorability - we are remembered by our family - greatness is for the very few. Your last line left me wondering. Well done - regards Dorothy x
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Hello ALD, an interesting four lines. I agree that birth is a matter of fate and death is just a matter of time for us all. As for memorability - we are remembered by our family - greatness is for the very few. Your last line left me wondering. Well done - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from Leann DS
I love this, especially the first three lines. In fact, in my opinion, it is awesome even without the last line. Very philosophical and oh, so true. Well done. Blessings to you.
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I love this, especially the first three lines. In fact, in my opinion, it is awesome even without the last line. Very philosophical and oh, so true. Well done. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I like this poem and I like how it is presented. I like the colors, the photos, and the larger font. I need to check that out for my own posts. The only thing I questioned was the word memorability. It's a long word with a lot of syllables, unlike birth and death. I wonder if it could be changed to something as simple as Life is a matter of deed. Great job!
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I like this poem and I like how it is presented. I like the colors, the photos, and the larger font. I need to check that out for my own posts. The only thing I questioned was the word memorability. It's a long word with a lot of syllables, unlike birth and death. I wonder if it could be changed to something as simple as Life is a matter of deed. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, you have summed it up very well, and in just a very short poem. It is thoughtful - and also provokes thought in the reader. Well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Yes, you have summed it up very well, and in just a very short poem. It is thoughtful - and also provokes thought in the reader. Well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
Comment from Shenelle Coplien
For just a few words written, I feel like this poem also captures how fast our birth, life, and demise can be. We really are just a speck in this world Nice work and keep it up!
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For just a few words written, I feel like this poem also captures how fast our birth, life, and demise can be. We really are just a speck in this world Nice work and keep it up!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from karenina
The secret of life...
It's not life.
It's how you live it.
Such important perspective in such a cold and callous world!
Brevity is not only "the soul of wit"... (As Shakespeare shared with us in Hamlet)
it can be the light that shines upon our face...
Karenina
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The secret of life...
It's not life.
It's how you live it.
Such important perspective in such a cold and callous world!
Brevity is not only "the soul of wit"... (As Shakespeare shared with us in Hamlet)
it can be the light that shines upon our face...
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from mermaids
Your words are so true. birth is a matter of fate. Excellent free verse poem that well describes the road of life. Your last line about the seer fits the poem and sums up the preceding three lines.
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Your words are so true. birth is a matter of fate. Excellent free verse poem that well describes the road of life. Your last line about the seer fits the poem and sums up the preceding three lines.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I agree with what the poem says. People cannot control birth. When it comes, no one can stop it. We all know death will come one day. When? Again we cannot control. The only thing we can control is our legacy. Our deeds are recorded...
I like this poem. It is excellently written.
Thank you for sharing.
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I agree with what the poem says. People cannot control birth. When it comes, no one can stop it. We all know death will come one day. When? Again we cannot control. The only thing we can control is our legacy. Our deeds are recorded...
I like this poem. It is excellently written.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from Sally Law
I see this is an older post, however, the message is always appreciated. I enjoyed your short verse and the spiritual message within. I believe that life is a gift from God, and then each day should be lived for him. A timely word, dear.
Thank you again, Sally :))
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I see this is an older post, however, the message is always appreciated. I enjoyed your short verse and the spiritual message within. I believe that life is a gift from God, and then each day should be lived for him. A timely word, dear.
Thank you again, Sally :))
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
