Rainbows in Verse
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Comment from Ricky1024
Hello dear I have a double rainbow story.
back about 10 or 12 years ago I would go to visit my gay friend Richard plunkett I won't beautiful antique store and I love antiques even though I'm not gay of course.
as the story progresses I power washed his dick in his stairway and actually it was so slimy I slid down my back and luckily didn't hurt myself when he was going to deal was when he came back we would go out to lunch or dinner..
I dare not tell him in my calamity but I was okay so I said let's get on our way and it rained and it rained along the way the clouds were black as we headed 10 minute drive from Long Beach township into the town of Beach Haven where we were going to go into a 60 style Cafe and enjoy a nice meal.
As we're enjoying the meal in a lightning and thunder crashed filing Wayne guide to go look outside so the double rainbow which I've never seen which was quite incredible as you well know.
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after a nice meal of I believe barbecue style take hot dogs hamburgers cuz it's been a while we decide to go sit at the car and look at the sunset over the bay.
Now back then I wore prescription sunglasses and drove a Corvette much later after another story I could tell I wind up getting LASIK surgery so I needed to sunglasses to see clearly as the sun was setting in the clouds overhead or passing through the Beautiful sunset.
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Now note I could see something that Richard couldn't see and since I'm a big talker and he was enjoying it he told me to please be quiet that was when I told him I'm experiencing something that unknown to you.
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it was incredible to see the shadows of the clouds which can only be viewed with sunglasses as they passed through the bright orange sunset and actually through seemingly the sun itself!
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begin told me to be quiet as I took the sunglasses off here put these on go see if he can tell me what's happening he told me now I know why you were talkin that is amazing .
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Richard has since sold his Long Beach island antique store and I have been all ripped down and redone and move back to boothbay Maine or he has another one and he's also curator of a museum so one day I will surprise him and come up there I do have his address he likes my ass!
Ricky
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Hello dear I have a double rainbow story.
back about 10 or 12 years ago I would go to visit my gay friend Richard plunkett I won't beautiful antique store and I love antiques even though I'm not gay of course.
as the story progresses I power washed his dick in his stairway and actually it was so slimy I slid down my back and luckily didn't hurt myself when he was going to deal was when he came back we would go out to lunch or dinner..
I dare not tell him in my calamity but I was okay so I said let's get on our way and it rained and it rained along the way the clouds were black as we headed 10 minute drive from Long Beach township into the town of Beach Haven where we were going to go into a 60 style Cafe and enjoy a nice meal.
As we're enjoying the meal in a lightning and thunder crashed filing Wayne guide to go look outside so the double rainbow which I've never seen which was quite incredible as you well know.
...
after a nice meal of I believe barbecue style take hot dogs hamburgers cuz it's been a while we decide to go sit at the car and look at the sunset over the bay.
Now back then I wore prescription sunglasses and drove a Corvette much later after another story I could tell I wind up getting LASIK surgery so I needed to sunglasses to see clearly as the sun was setting in the clouds overhead or passing through the Beautiful sunset.
...
Now note I could see something that Richard couldn't see and since I'm a big talker and he was enjoying it he told me to please be quiet that was when I told him I'm experiencing something that unknown to you.
...
it was incredible to see the shadows of the clouds which can only be viewed with sunglasses as they passed through the bright orange sunset and actually through seemingly the sun itself!
...
begin told me to be quiet as I took the sunglasses off here put these on go see if he can tell me what's happening he told me now I know why you were talkin that is amazing .
...
Richard has since sold his Long Beach island antique store and I have been all ripped down and redone and move back to boothbay Maine or he has another one and he's also curator of a museum so one day I will surprise him and come up there I do have his address he likes my ass!
Ricky
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Dear Ricky, I"m glad you saw a double rainbow through sunglasses, Thanks for your story, comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written poem about rainbows in verse. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Donna, This is a very well written poem about rainbows in verse. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Donna
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
How nice you always write verses whenever you find there rainbows in the sky and rains after the storm; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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How nice you always write verses whenever you find there rainbows in the sky and rains after the storm; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Glad you enjoyed it. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Rainbows in Verse, presented in rhyming couplets and uni-rhymed tercets, captures some of what inspires poems top be made. The sense of light and shadow which comes into a creative mind and sent back out as words. Nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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This poem, Rainbows in Verse, presented in rhyming couplets and uni-rhymed tercets, captures some of what inspires poems top be made. The sense of light and shadow which comes into a creative mind and sent back out as words. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review and compliment. Dove