Lover's Embrace
When we move as one...14 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
This is one of the first essence poems that I've read that followed the contest prompt with an internal and ending rhyme. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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This is one of the first essence poems that I've read that followed the contest prompt with an internal and ending rhyme. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, Earl, for such an awesome review!!
Comment from kahpot
A very moving and touching short poem, these words combined with this beautiful artwork are excellent, when we move as one, a wonderful piece, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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A very moving and touching short poem, these words combined with this beautiful artwork are excellent, when we move as one, a wonderful piece, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a lovely review!!
Comment from Gloria ....
You have capture the sensual essence of those oh so sweet kisses perfectly making for a lovely entry into this contest.
The only thing you are missing is the internal rhyme for the end rhyme in each line. An easy repair I am sure before the contest closes. (OOPS, I see the internal rhymes now. ))
Sorry for my initial error and best wishes to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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You have capture the sensual essence of those oh so sweet kisses perfectly making for a lovely entry into this contest.
The only thing you are missing is the internal rhyme for the end rhyme in each line. An easy repair I am sure before the contest closes. (OOPS, I see the internal rhymes now. ))
Sorry for my initial error and best wishes to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review! ;)
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautiful image! Perfect picture!
The tenderness of your words are perfect for the tender message reflected!
Good luck in your contest!!! :)
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Beautiful image! Perfect picture!
The tenderness of your words are perfect for the tender message reflected!
Good luck in your contest!!! :)
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review!!
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You are so welcome!
