Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Love this combination for the contest! ;) The words to do no seem forced and make for a lovely 'complete presentation' with your chosen pic! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ; )

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019

Thanks. Glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from raven meadows

Excellent

I'm a big fan of this piece! An essence poem is a very difficult poem, in my opinion, but I think you succeeded with flying colors! The imagery in this poem is relaxing and poignant.

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019

Thanks. Yes, it's harder than it looks. Glad you enjoyed it.