The Baseball Game
A batter and outfielder duel.5 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Yes, and I love baseball, and I love your Essence poem; perfect syllable count per line and good internal and ending rhyme.
Loved your author notes as well: the essential essence of the 'competition between offense and defense'. That is exactly what I see in your poem.
If the batter is a NY Yankee, I'm going to bet on him :)
Great job, and very, very best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Yes, and I love baseball, and I love your Essence poem; perfect syllable count per line and good internal and ending rhyme.
Loved your author notes as well: the essential essence of the 'competition between offense and defense'. That is exactly what I see in your poem.
If the batter is a NY Yankee, I'm going to bet on him :)
Great job, and very, very best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your comments and review
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like a good poem written about America's favorite sport. I like the photo for the play from the player can represent any team player. Baseball makes for a well written essence poem writing prompt contest entry.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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I like a good poem written about America's favorite sport. I like the photo for the play from the player can represent any team player. Baseball makes for a well written essence poem writing prompt contest entry.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
nice presentation.
-Great topic, too, we
love baseball in our family!
-Your note is appreciated.
-You met all of the requirements
for the poem very well.
-Good imagery, and a
summary of the game when
forced to use 12 syllables.
-I guess you would say you have
the essence of the game:)
-I like the last line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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-Good artwork and
nice presentation.
-Great topic, too, we
love baseball in our family!
-Your note is appreciated.
-You met all of the requirements
for the poem very well.
-Good imagery, and a
summary of the game when
forced to use 12 syllables.
-I guess you would say you have
the essence of the game:)
-I like the last line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your comments and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from rockmann
I am not a big fan of poetry, but I found your effort well done. As a big baseball fan I was immediately drawn to your poem. And it told a complete story in only two lines.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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I am not a big fan of poetry, but I found your effort well done. As a big baseball fan I was immediately drawn to your poem. And it told a complete story in only two lines.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your message and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Baseball game essence lies in a batter and outfielder duel, as the batter up gets a hit and the outfielder bets on mitt; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Baseball game essence lies in a batter and outfielder duel, as the batter up gets a hit and the outfielder bets on mitt; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your comments and review.
