My Anger
Essence poem contest4 total reviews
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I respect how you write and introduce the angry to the Fanstory community.
Anger feelings are so personal. Your thoughts on angry create the perfect writing prompt entry. Thanks, for entering the writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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I respect how you write and introduce the angry to the Fanstory community.
Anger feelings are so personal. Your thoughts on angry create the perfect writing prompt entry. Thanks, for entering the writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Dear Darlene, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from fm wright
Didn't see an internal rhyme, as to me, anger and danger do not sound the same. Like the poem, though. Emotions, in such a short forum can be hard to relate, however you handled this very well. Also, I think the picture compliments your words quite well!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Didn't see an internal rhyme, as to me, anger and danger do not sound the same. Like the poem, though. Emotions, in such a short forum can be hard to relate, however you handled this very well. Also, I think the picture compliments your words quite well!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Dear fm wright, I went in and corrected, if you want to take another look. Thanks to you and another poet for seeing the mistake.
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Yes, I will go in and look again at your poem.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Two lines, six syllables and ending rhyme ok. The middle rhyme is good as edited. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Two lines, six syllables and ending rhyme ok. The middle rhyme is good as edited. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Dear Lance, I went in and edited, if you want to take another look.Thanks to you and another poet for seeing the mistake.
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I revised the rating. I just hope your edited poem doesn?t beat my entry. LoL.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Sometimes the eyes have a lot more to say than the lips...at least when your used to 'reading' people! ;) ;) A very good offering for the contest today -- best of luck at the polls! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Sometimes the eyes have a lot more to say than the lips...at least when your used to 'reading' people! ;) ;) A very good offering for the contest today -- best of luck at the polls! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your comments and review.
