Nightmare
Once inside, escape seems impossible...13 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, descriptive piece effectively meets the requirements for
this form, making every word count and painting one picture. I used to have nightmares like the one you've described.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
Your well-written, descriptive piece effectively meets the requirements for
this form, making every word count and painting one picture. I used to have nightmares like the one you've described.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for the complimentary review!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a scary encounter with a nightmare and mine are always so real and believable. You describe the experience so well here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
This is a scary encounter with a nightmare and mine are always so real and believable. You describe the experience so well here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the complimentary review!!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well, that doesn't sound like fun at all. It does create a pictures, a horrible one. Sounds like one of those bad dreams when you can't more. Well done! It's fun to be scared sometimes. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
Well, that doesn't sound like fun at all. It does create a pictures, a horrible one. Sounds like one of those bad dreams when you can't more. Well done! It's fun to be scared sometimes. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for that great review, Roxanna!!