Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Till Death Do Us Part -Chapter 7"A Wartime Romance
34 total reviews
Comment from Lu Saluna
I must say I am really enjoying the story so far. The love this pair share is rare. I also have to say the writers are very talented as well! The poetry is excellent and the short story as well. You are writing a novel but you are poets and short story writers as well.
Very impressive.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I must say I am really enjoying the story so far. The love this pair share is rare. I also have to say the writers are very talented as well! The poetry is excellent and the short story as well. You are writing a novel but you are poets and short story writers as well.
Very impressive.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hi Lu! I'm sure we've said it before, but it's worth sayin' again! Your continued support means so much to us! We're glad you are following along and enjoying the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 7. We "SALUTE" you for all those kind words! Awww, shucks... :) There are now 21 chapters posted, and we're fixin' to post Chapter 22 real soon, so read on! Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like how you mentioned Sandra Dee. Those growing up days were also when we grew up around here. Great story. Unto chapter eight. I know it'll be good as the others.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I like how you mentioned Sandra Dee. Those growing up days were also when we grew up around here. Great story. Unto chapter eight. I know it'll be good as the others.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hi Rosemary! We really appreciate your continued support with Love Long Distance. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We are happy that you can relate to the time frame.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from DonandVicki
I will have to go back and get caught up on the rest of your story. I like the way that you end your chapter, keeping the reader wanting more. You use of dialogue is very impressive.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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I will have to go back and get caught up on the rest of your story. I like the way that you end your chapter, keeping the reader wanting more. You use of dialogue is very impressive.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Hi There!
Thank you again for reading and reviewing Chapter 7 of Love Long Distance. Yes, we'd love for you to go and read the previous chapter! Also, the next chapter is in the works and coming soon. So glad you like the cliffhanger at the end and you enjoyed the dialogue.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I enjoyed reading your work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Complimentary artwork enhanced the reading experience. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed reading your work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Complimentary artwork enhanced the reading experience. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hi Lance!
I'm happy you enjoyed this poem and it kept your attention from beginning to end. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Thank you also for commenting about the delicious cake image.
Blessings,
Cathy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Tootie,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having smooth and captivating flow with lovely description of 'on the way scenes and situations'.
Rabid dog Episode is particularly noteworthy.
Next part may be more interesting, I hope so.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Hello Tootie,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having smooth and captivating flow with lovely description of 'on the way scenes and situations'.
Rabid dog Episode is particularly noteworthy.
Next part may be more interesting, I hope so.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Hi There!
Much appreciate you stopping by to read and review Chapter 7 of Love Long Distance. Thank you!! Great comments about the structure and flow. Wonder why you said next part may be more interesting ??? We do hope you enjoyed it! Glad you will continue to follow along. It means a lot to us. Chapter 8 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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Bill & Cathy, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from robyn corum
Cathy,
A fine addition to this on-going love story. Sounds like there's plenty to be both excited and worried about here. Nice mixture. Still a lot of great writing and plenty of tense moments.
Some notes:
1.) "Hurrah, that's my Billy!" He got those qualities from me, Cathy!
--> no q marks in the middle
2.) along with me," he continued. (")I still like to read his stories,
3.) I thought. "Why not? Oh, I know! It's because of the flame from the lantern.(")
Thanks!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Cathy,
A fine addition to this on-going love story. Sounds like there's plenty to be both excited and worried about here. Nice mixture. Still a lot of great writing and plenty of tense moments.
Some notes:
1.) "Hurrah, that's my Billy!" He got those qualities from me, Cathy!
--> no q marks in the middle
2.) along with me," he continued. (")I still like to read his stories,
3.) I thought. "Why not? Oh, I know! It's because of the flame from the lantern.(")
Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Hi Robyn! Those " marks are the easiest things to miss! Additions made. Thank you so much for the edit notes, and thank you for reading and reviewing Chapter 7 of Love Long Distance. Glad you are enjoying the story! Chapter 8 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sanku
I did not know that rabid dogs are afraid of fire. I knew they are afraid of water...
The story continues to be interesting. including another story within the story was very clever .will look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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I did not know that rabid dogs are afraid of fire. I knew they are afraid of water...
The story continues to be interesting. including another story within the story was very clever .will look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hi Sanku!
We are so glad the story continues to be interesting to you. So much more to come, so stay tuned! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. It means a great deal to us. Wishing you a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ricky1024
Till death do us part was well-written
It read and flowed well with no grammar issues.
Theme and Imagery
were Excellent and exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Till death do us part was well-written
It read and flowed well with no grammar issues.
Theme and Imagery
were Excellent and exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hi Doctor Ricky!
We really appreciate you stopping by to read and review Chapter 7 of Love Long Distance. Thank You! Great comments. We're glad you found this excellent and exceptional. HURRAH! Chapter 8 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, such a lovely story that does a wonderful job of the transitioning between here and now and there and then... almost spell-binding! ;) ;) Thank you both for sharing .... I need to go back and read the previous chapters! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Oh, such a lovely story that does a wonderful job of the transitioning between here and now and there and then... almost spell-binding! ;) ;) Thank you both for sharing .... I need to go back and read the previous chapters! ;) ;)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hi Yvette!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We love your comments and are so glad you enjoyed the read and found it almost spell-binding! ;) ;) Yes, Yes, read the previous chapters! And please continue to follow along. There's so much more to come! Chapter 8 is in the works and will be posted in the near future.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Perry Johnson
Enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest. I was on the ride throughout. No negative comments here. It was a great conversation. Also the part about the rabid dog came as a surprise to me.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest. I was on the ride throughout. No negative comments here. It was a great conversation. Also the part about the rabid dog came as a surprise to me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hi Perry!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 7 of Love Long Distance. We're glad you enjoyed it! You are new to FanStory. Welcome! We noticed that you did not offer any suggestions for improvement. Usually when a rating is lower than 5 stars, there are some. Do you have any? If so, we'd would like to know because we appreciate the input. If not, would you consider adding that extra star? We hope you will continue to follow along. Chapter 8 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy