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Comment from Sanku
No doubt water is life. we living in chennai is experiencing this .struggling for water and praying for rain i think this is the punishment for electing wrong people to the government.
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No doubt water is life. we living in chennai is experiencing this .struggling for water and praying for rain i think this is the punishment for electing wrong people to the government.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
Comment from Ricky1024
well written piece as each and every Sabbath Sunday I honor and taking the sacrament for our heavenly father and his son Jesus to Christ.
as I continued on into the editor's notes they were also very well presented good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024
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well written piece as each and every Sabbath Sunday I honor and taking the sacrament for our heavenly father and his son Jesus to Christ.
as I continued on into the editor's notes they were also very well presented good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I was intrigued by the idea that instead of fetching just water from a river, someone is fetching "lives." Water is indeed a scarce resource in many parts of the world. So that part has a basis in reality. I guess I would add a comma after "return home" in the last sentence.
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I was intrigued by the idea that instead of fetching just water from a river, someone is fetching "lives." Water is indeed a scarce resource in many parts of the world. So that part has a basis in reality. I guess I would add a comma after "return home" in the last sentence.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver something of a parable feel in this piece. God's Son is the model to follow when walking the path toward eternal life and peace. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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You deliver something of a parable feel in this piece. God's Son is the model to follow when walking the path toward eternal life and peace. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
Daniel asks a lot of questions. But the wisdom of the father is profound, that God reaveals and teaches lessons on his schedule not ours. And we need to embrace the lessons as they come.
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Daniel asks a lot of questions. But the wisdom of the father is profound, that God reaveals and teaches lessons on his schedule not ours. And we need to embrace the lessons as they come.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Teri7
I really enjoyed this short story about God Teaches Us Life. That is so true. It is truly amazing to me what a wonderful and mighty God we serve. Thank you for sharing this! Blessings, Teri
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I really enjoyed this short story about God Teaches Us Life. That is so true. It is truly amazing to me what a wonderful and mighty God we serve. Thank you for sharing this! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
Comment from DonandVicki
I can see that you have a lot of material here for a religious book. The bible is full of stories that you can create from. Then artwork that you chose does enhance and complement your story.
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I can see that you have a lot of material here for a religious book. The bible is full of stories that you can create from. Then artwork that you chose does enhance and complement your story.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
Comment from artisart4u
This is nice about how the son interpreted
the words, he knew he wasn't going to waste his water.
Congratulations on being recognized and good luck in the contest.
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This is nice about how the son interpreted
the words, he knew he wasn't going to waste his water.
Congratulations on being recognized and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
Comment from Gunner Lil
Well written.
An easy read with a good rate and POV.
Reminded me of my religion class in grade
school at Saint Stan's.
Your dialogue was excellent and suited the
time period.
Thank you!!
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Well written.
An easy read with a good rate and POV.
Reminded me of my religion class in grade
school at Saint Stan's.
Your dialogue was excellent and suited the
time period.
Thank you!!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
Comment from the13thpoet
Your spiritual offerings never disappoint. It's funny how people pray to GOD for something and if they don't get it, they start to question GOD. They act as if GOD is a magic genie to grant their wishes. Like you stated GOD does things is way in his time not ours. Reminds me of something I use to hear all the time as a child in reference to GOD:
he may not come when you call him but he's always on time
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Your spiritual offerings never disappoint. It's funny how people pray to GOD for something and if they don't get it, they start to question GOD. They act as if GOD is a magic genie to grant their wishes. Like you stated GOD does things is way in his time not ours. Reminds me of something I use to hear all the time as a child in reference to GOD:
he may not come when you call him but he's always on time
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
