laden with wishes
a tetractys poem2 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent Tetractys! You met each line's syllable requirements. Beautiful artwork. It is an exquisite companion to this piece. The burst of colors shoot across the page much like a shooting star. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Excellent Tetractys! You met each line's syllable requirements. Beautiful artwork. It is an exquisite companion to this piece. The burst of colors shoot across the page much like a shooting star. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Brenda. It was a fun write to imagine shooting stars weighed down with so many wishes, cheers,
Comment from Raul1
Nice of you writing about wishes. They are very useful. I like the simplicity of this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Nice of you writing about wishes. They are very useful. I like the simplicity of this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Raul. It was fun to imagine those shooting stars weighed down with so many wishes, cheers.
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You're welcome.
