The Way We Danced
And still do...17 total reviews
Comment from fluffnstuff
This is a great one my fanstory friend and i am sorry that i don't have any more sixes to give you....it deserves it. Taketh care anf talk to you soon .
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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This is a great one my fanstory friend and i am sorry that i don't have any more sixes to give you....it deserves it. Taketh care anf talk to you soon .
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, I'm really glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Janetsue
This is so sweet and romantic. I hope it is a true story because it's heartwarming to think that, so long ago, your relationship began with a dance that became so memorable you can convincingly write about it today in such a talented manner.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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This is so sweet and romantic. I hope it is a true story because it's heartwarming to think that, so long ago, your relationship began with a dance that became so memorable you can convincingly write about it today in such a talented manner.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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It is my story. Thank you for reading and for such a wonderful review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading your love story described as your dance together. Awkwardly, then smoothly you advance into life... dancing and sharing life together. Very nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed reading your love story described as your dance together. Awkwardly, then smoothly you advance into life... dancing and sharing life together. Very nice.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and wonderful review. :)
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely tribute to that special dance back in 1978. Memories can bring back all those feelings of joy and keep them alive in our hearts and minds forever. May you both share many more dance moves together, like Fred and Ginger!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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This is a lovely tribute to that special dance back in 1978. Memories can bring back all those feelings of joy and keep them alive in our hearts and minds forever. May you both share many more dance moves together, like Fred and Ginger!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much. We still dance although I'm still awkward. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about dancing, many of us love to dance but have something that holds us back to enjoy it ourselves, it is a great idea to dance with a partner while standing on his shoes.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem about dancing, many of us love to dance but have something that holds us back to enjoy it ourselves, it is a great idea to dance with a partner while standing on his shoes.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. It's always appreciated. :)
Comment from juliaSjames
I enjoyed this delightful story in a poem. Vivid, funny and so romantic.
As a child that's how I learned to dance and how I taught my grandkids too. Of course dancing is more free style. But still one needs to practise some dance steps.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed this delightful story in a poem. Vivid, funny and so romantic.
As a child that's how I learned to dance and how I taught my grandkids too. Of course dancing is more free style. But still one needs to practise some dance steps.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem,
and sharing your story. I danced on the feet of my father, I remember that so well. I wish I had him here now. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from AprilViolet
This poem is exceptional! The way your words flow across the paper are effortless. Love the picture you used as well! Good luck in your contest! :) :) :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This poem is exceptional! The way your words flow across the paper are effortless. Love the picture you used as well! Good luck in your contest! :) :) :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the shining stars and your kind words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I really enjoyed your contest entry, BN. You did a super job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes, imagery, and a great message. I like the way you repeat how much that dance of '78 started it all and still causes you to feel the way you do today. Thanks for sharing and best wises. Jan
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I really enjoyed your contest entry, BN. You did a super job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes, imagery, and a great message. I like the way you repeat how much that dance of '78 started it all and still causes you to feel the way you do today. Thanks for sharing and best wises. Jan
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the lovely six stars and this wonderful review.
Comment from V.R.K
Beautifully written! I love how vividly you described everything throughout the entire piece. Keep up the good work!
Also, this reminds me of my first date, so that makes your poem all the more special to me.
Best to you,
V.R.K
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Beautifully written! I love how vividly you described everything throughout the entire piece. Keep up the good work!
Also, this reminds me of my first date, so that makes your poem all the more special to me.
Best to you,
V.R.K
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your very nice review and the six stars...it means a lot. :)
Comment from Anuradha Dev
Such a sweet and romantic poem! I loved it! How not being good at dancing affects your self-esteem, but really dancing if what we feel . if we feel free, the dancing is always great!
Much enjoyed this peace. Thanks for writing it!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Such a sweet and romantic poem! I loved it! How not being good at dancing affects your self-esteem, but really dancing if what we feel . if we feel free, the dancing is always great!
Much enjoyed this peace. Thanks for writing it!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Wow! Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the six stars. I really appreciate it. :)
