Rage
Anger changes things5 total reviews
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Very true. Anger changes us, and usually not for the better. This is a powerfully worded poem, and one that we can all relate to at one time or another! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Very true. Anger changes us, and usually not for the better. This is a powerfully worded poem, and one that we can all relate to at one time or another! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I like your use of strong words, creating strong images. I could feel the monster in that person's spirit.
Love the last line, for it speaks not only of probability, but warning. I also feel that the soul that rages in this poem knows deep down this is not how she/he is intended to be'. Just a thought.
This is really a great contest entry! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I like your use of strong words, creating strong images. I could feel the monster in that person's spirit.
Love the last line, for it speaks not only of probability, but warning. I also feel that the soul that rages in this poem knows deep down this is not how she/he is intended to be'. Just a thought.
This is really a great contest entry! Best wishes!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I'm glad the piece spoke to you in such a way. I love the you got that from it.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Like rage, angry is the heart's competition. I like the flaming red colors of the photo like a fire rising in the heart. A perfect syllabus poem for the contest.
Best regards for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Like rage, angry is the heart's competition. I like the flaming red colors of the photo like a fire rising in the heart. A perfect syllabus poem for the contest.
Best regards for your contest entry.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Yes, fire in the heart that is why I picked that picture. I am glad you liked the picture and the piece.
Comment from shaffer40
This is a clever creation complying with strict guidelines. Not to mention that the statement you make is so true. You should fare well in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This is a clever creation complying with strict guidelines. Not to mention that the statement you make is so true. You should fare well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much. It wasn't easy making the count. I had to think about each word I wanted to us very carefully.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If you one is filled with rage, then we make ourselves unhappy as well as others. It is best to be calm and we still get the same things done but is a quiet and more positive way, poignant words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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If you one is filled with rage, then we make ourselves unhappy as well as others. It is best to be calm and we still get the same things done but is a quiet and more positive way, poignant words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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It is more quiet and more positive to be calm, but sometimes no matter how you try you are pushed and tested till you go over the edge. Thank you for your review.
