Break of Day
The sights and sounds of morning's rise...10 total reviews
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Absolutely beautiful. I also enjoyed the art and font color choice. Favorite: 'midst the murky moors masked in mild mauves. I enjoyed learning of the format and appreciate that you sponsored the contest. I always like to try and solve a puzzle and the strict syllable count and alliterative format offered the opportunity.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Absolutely beautiful. I also enjoyed the art and font color choice. Favorite: 'midst the murky moors masked in mild mauves. I enjoyed learning of the format and appreciate that you sponsored the contest. I always like to try and solve a puzzle and the strict syllable count and alliterative format offered the opportunity.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thanx for your review, Wendy, so glad you enjoyed this one! ;) And thanx, again, for joining in the fun with us! ;) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very relaxing poem that would benefit anyone facing a hectic day. I enjoyed experiencing it because I can get impatient some times and need to sit back and take a deep, refreshing breath. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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This is a very relaxing poem that would benefit anyone facing a hectic day. I enjoyed experiencing it because I can get impatient some times and need to sit back and take a deep, refreshing breath. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Many thanks for your review!!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author! This is quite a lovely poem! I love that the crocuses are so well represented! I just read about this form of poetry and I can't wait to try my hand! Well done :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hello Author! This is quite a lovely poem! I love that the crocuses are so well represented! I just read about this form of poetry and I can't wait to try my hand! Well done :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Cindy Warren
It almost makes me want to get up in the morning. Almost. These days I'd rather lie in bed and listen to the birds. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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It almost makes me want to get up in the morning. Almost. These days I'd rather lie in bed and listen to the birds. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for the encouraging review!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem to celebrate the early morning magical beauty rising from the mist that will soon evaporates before the heatingame sun to show more beautiful scenes at our feet.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem to celebrate the early morning magical beauty rising from the mist that will soon evaporates before the heatingame sun to show more beautiful scenes at our feet.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this interesting form of poetry that is filled with alliteration. You chose excellent images to accompany it with your words and picture.
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks for sharing this interesting form of poetry that is filled with alliteration. You chose excellent images to accompany it with your words and picture.
Bill
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The middle stanza is my favourite, you brought colour to my eyes amid the murky moors mist, your brought the sounds of the crickets in your final stanza and your overall presentation is delightful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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The middle stanza is my favourite, you brought colour to my eyes amid the murky moors mist, your brought the sounds of the crickets in your final stanza and your overall presentation is delightful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review, Dolly!!
Comment from Yuna Akil
Hi! Your poem was quite wholesome! Your last stanza transported me out of my room and took me back all the way to summer camp. I thought you did a great job with imagery and I applaud you for being able to conjure so much vividness with so much structure.
Thank you for this!
Yuna.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Hi! Your poem was quite wholesome! Your last stanza transported me out of my room and took me back all the way to summer camp. I thought you did a great job with imagery and I applaud you for being able to conjure so much vividness with so much structure.
Thank you for this!
Yuna.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your awesome review, Yuna!!
Comment from James Orton
It certainly was uplifting . Superbly descriptive and great alliteration used throughout . Picture and Ront colour also great choice . Done really well having to use such q specific way of structuring the poem too
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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It certainly was uplifting . Superbly descriptive and great alliteration used throughout . Picture and Ront colour also great choice . Done really well having to use such q specific way of structuring the poem too
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a detailed and encouraging review, James!!
Comment from LisaMay
Such an overdose of alliteration, I feasted on the opulent language utilised to describe sights and sound. And that photo... such a beautifully perfect fit for the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Such an overdose of alliteration, I feasted on the opulent language utilised to describe sights and sound. And that photo... such a beautifully perfect fit for the poem.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Yep -- this one is definitely loaded with alliteration!! ;) ;) Thanx for the review on this one, L-M! ;) Much appreciated! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on replies?slowly catching up life this weekend ?.can you say ?no time on computer? lately?.LOL!
