The Interview Part 5
Gunny wakes up in a MASH unit in the South Korea15 total reviews
Comment from Rikki66
Gunny dies young Dot and TJ get together. Good script.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Gunny dies young Dot and TJ get together. Good script.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Rikki
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Welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting script you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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This is a very interesting script you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
I thought Gunny was reaching his 100th birthday. Aren't Dot and TJ the ghosts? This does explain the lilacs and I can guess where TJ is buried now.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I thought Gunny was reaching his 100th birthday. Aren't Dot and TJ the ghosts? This does explain the lilacs and I can guess where TJ is buried now.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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The plot thickens.
Comment from judiverse
Count me among the confused. I think I'm getting that Gunny died, but the only I can make sense of this is that he was taken back in time mentally. I don't think reporters would want to interview a dead soldier. You create a great atmosphere, and the lilacs make a good thread to run through the play. judi
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Count me among the confused. I think I'm getting that Gunny died, but the only I can make sense of this is that he was taken back in time mentally. I don't think reporters would want to interview a dead soldier. You create a great atmosphere, and the lilacs make a good thread to run through the play. judi
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I'm still building this one. False endings are my new drug.
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Yes, I know other writers who do that. judi
Comment from brenda faye curtis
The text is well-written, but I must confess, I'm lost. In the last part of the story, 100-year old Gunny has confessed to killing his brother and now, he died in the war? Really lost here.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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The text is well-written, but I must confess, I'm lost. In the last part of the story, 100-year old Gunny has confessed to killing his brother and now, he died in the war? Really lost here.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I?ll bring it around soon.
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Ok.
Comment from kahpot
Well, I'm not sure whether I'm confused or intrigued, so Tj moved the Lilacs not gunny, gunny died in the war so could not have killed Tj, I can see how Tj and Dot come to have a child as they are now talking about Dot and Gunny having a family when he returns, Alas? very interesting story****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Well, I'm not sure whether I'm confused or intrigued, so Tj moved the Lilacs not gunny, gunny died in the war so could not have killed Tj, I can see how Tj and Dot come to have a child as they are now talking about Dot and Gunny having a family when he returns, Alas? very interesting story****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Maybe one more scene to bring it all together.
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Yes thank you
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill. so how I see it is that Gunny has passed away, but somehow he's come back as a spirit or a ghost and is now able to monitor his wife and friend. I may be wrong but I like the idea of it. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Hi Bill. so how I see it is that Gunny has passed away, but somehow he's come back as a spirit or a ghost and is now able to monitor his wife and friend. I may be wrong but I like the idea of it. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Ulla. It has caused strife among the masses.
Comment from Sylvia Page
This is rather confusing. Is it meant to be? Who are the dead people here? Has this story gone beyond the grave?
Interesting. Gunny dies on the operating table or is he in a state of comatose?
Regards
Sylvia
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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This is rather confusing. Is it meant to be? Who are the dead people here? Has this story gone beyond the grave?
Interesting. Gunny dies on the operating table or is he in a state of comatose?
Regards
Sylvia
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Confusion is the impetus of discovery.
Comment from nomi338
Oh you are so sneaky. First you have me thinking that Gunny killed his wife and brother for betraying him, when in fact he kind of pushes them together with his blessings, after he perishes on the operating table.
Or did I thoroughly misread you again? My head hurts.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Oh you are so sneaky. First you have me thinking that Gunny killed his wife and brother for betraying him, when in fact he kind of pushes them together with his blessings, after he perishes on the operating table.
Or did I thoroughly misread you again? My head hurts.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I may even have another one.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
SURPRISE! Well, now don't that just beat all.... I'm still trying to figure out the whole interview/hospital thing: see, I had Dot and TJ as dead (and ghosts) and all of it in the present. Now, this jump to the past back in Korea...does this mean none of the other stuff ever happened it was just the bullet causing dreams? So, you know I'm the crazy, sci-fi/fantasy blonde, but I'm trying to tie this to the others...? Maybe if this surgery had been in the present, you could 'play' with that angle...? HELP! :) :) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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SURPRISE! Well, now don't that just beat all.... I'm still trying to figure out the whole interview/hospital thing: see, I had Dot and TJ as dead (and ghosts) and all of it in the present. Now, this jump to the past back in Korea...does this mean none of the other stuff ever happened it was just the bullet causing dreams? So, you know I'm the crazy, sci-fi/fantasy blonde, but I'm trying to tie this to the others...? Maybe if this surgery had been in the present, you could 'play' with that angle...? HELP! :) :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I felt an alternative story line for Dot and TJ would be cool at this point. I included the idea of TJ being buried under the lilacs and a choking reference. I may have had a little 'Jacob's Ladder' thought in the back of my head as well.
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Cool! ;)