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Rememberies

A short rhymed poem

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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This is yet another reason why I love children so. The words they invent are so spot-on, aren't they?! Do you keep a journal of them? These are just too precious to lose. Needless to say, I love this poem. xo

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sally Law
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How precious and even more so for you coming from your daughter. It is these sweet memories combined with remembrances that make life so rich. Loved the poem and photo, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the rememberies that will stay with us for many years after they are made. Such a unique word for the precious memories of our children.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
Comment from rama devi
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I love making up words and this one is SO SWEET! Nice poem. Cute, simple, cherish-able!

Good flow and rhymes. Great presentation. Two minor spag suggestions for your consideration:

They're times we've spent together(,) and
I hold them in my heart -
T(t)hey make delightful company
whenever we're apart.

Love,
rd

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!
reply by rama devi on 24-Jul-2019
    xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Debra. I'll bet your daughter gets a lot of compliments on her word ~ rememberies. Kids have a unique way of describing things that is usually much more creative than the word used for that thing. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Hello :)
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really do appreciate your feedback!
    Best wishes, Debra :)

    Ps: Please forgive me for the cut and paste reply. I've been off site for a few days and haven't much time to catch up with reviews!