Softly, Now...Ever So Softly
A Minute of meditation for your evening...11 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A beautifully penned poem, mystery poet. I like the formatting as well as the divine verse of the sacred night.
Sending you my best with a vote for the contest,
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
A beautifully penned poem, mystery poet. I like the formatting as well as the divine verse of the sacred night.
Sending you my best with a vote for the contest,
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Many thanks for such a wonderful review and your gracious nod, my lady!!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This wonderful Minute is both colorful and peaceful and describes well the calming effect of meditation. I love the message and the beautiful rhythm of both the poem form and your words.
This is a great contest entry, and I do wish you the very best.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
This wonderful Minute is both colorful and peaceful and describes well the calming effect of meditation. I love the message and the beautiful rhythm of both the poem form and your words.
This is a great contest entry, and I do wish you the very best.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much for your detailed and encouraging review!!
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Loved it!
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on crafting this verse that is full of sensory images and reflections. I like the progression of the experience as you describe it. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
Good job on crafting this verse that is full of sensory images and reflections. I like the progression of the experience as you describe it. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun minute poem about the dreams we dream comes softly and makes us feel relaxed and serenity welcomes us with a calm debut and caress our souls.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
A very well-written fun minute poem about the dreams we dream comes softly and makes us feel relaxed and serenity welcomes us with a calm debut and caress our souls.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review, Sandra!!
Comment from Janetsue
This is a soothing work with the intention of relaxing mind and body for better health, and for some specific situation that might currently be draining a lot of strength and energy. It is a super Minute Poem. Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
This is a soothing work with the intention of relaxing mind and body for better health, and for some specific situation that might currently be draining a lot of strength and energy. It is a super Minute Poem. Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for this wonderful review, Spangle!!
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You're very welcome, Mystery Writer! :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and form is very good.
-I like the topic, and
the imagery is effective.
-The idea of "climbing
into dreams" is a very good one.
-I also like the floating and boat
images in verse two.
-You give very good examples
of serenity, and end with a
peaceful concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and form is very good.
-I like the topic, and
the imagery is effective.
-The idea of "climbing
into dreams" is a very good one.
-I also like the floating and boat
images in verse two.
-You give very good examples
of serenity, and end with a
peaceful concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Pam!!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. Your color scheme, picture, color changing font, descriptive words, and overall message add to the enjoyment of your contest entry. Thanks for haring and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. Your color scheme, picture, color changing font, descriptive words, and overall message add to the enjoyment of your contest entry. Thanks for haring and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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My sincerest thanks for your wonderful review, Jan!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully-written minute-poem movingly conveys its themes(s).
For truths and possibilities to surface from the busyness of life, one must allow time for pondering--quiet time.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
Your skillfully-written minute-poem movingly conveys its themes(s).
For truths and possibilities to surface from the busyness of life, one must allow time for pondering--quiet time.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review, Janice!!
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, dreaming of a different or better place or time, without the fears of daily stress, we can and will be calmed in that time of need and peace, a beautiful poem and artwork, excellent presentation, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
Wonderful, dreaming of a different or better place or time, without the fears of daily stress, we can and will be calmed in that time of need and peace, a beautiful poem and artwork, excellent presentation, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Wow, kahpot!! You have just made my weekend!! ;) ;) Thank you so very much this awesome review and those lovely stars! Here's sending a relaxing smile along the internet to you for the week ahead! ;) ;) Take care!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write filled with the joys of meditation and peaceful moments in life, I do have a suggestion for you for the last stanza:
Serenity soon welcomes you:
(A) calm debut
(in) soul's caress
(may) manifest...
Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
An ambient write filled with the joys of meditation and peaceful moments in life, I do have a suggestion for you for the last stanza:
Serenity soon welcomes you:
(A) calm debut
(in) soul's caress
(may) manifest...
Love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your review and awesome suggestion!! So appreciated!
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Thank you for your review and your suggestion!!