Choose Wisely
Minute Poem Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
Wow...what a powerful poem. It paints the picture of a rocky/controlling relationship/marriage and not sure if there is greif or relief by losing the other.
Well written.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Wow...what a powerful poem. It paints the picture of a rocky/controlling relationship/marriage and not sure if there is greif or relief by losing the other.
Well written.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Excellent comments, Elizabeth! You get what I was trying to say which means a lot. I appreciate your time and stars. I'm glad you liked this. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have left everything to her choice, whether to celebrate or hate; after she has already bade goodbye; you are now curious with action at her end; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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You have left everything to her choice, whether to celebrate or hate; after she has already bade goodbye; you are now curious with action at her end; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, DR, for this lovely review. This is my favorite poetry form and I enjoyed writing this. I'm so glad you liked it! Your comments and stars are very much appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about making wise choices ned decisions. We can do anything we like to do but with hate in our hearts we cannot find anything to celebrate.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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A very well-written minute poem about making wise choices ned decisions. We can do anything we like to do but with hate in our hearts we cannot find anything to celebrate.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sandra. This is a great review and I love when a reader "gets it". Your comments are lovely and your stars are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you liked this piece. Have a good weekend.
Comment from Miles Connolly
Yaaaasss, if someone is going to treat you like that and make you cry, you don't need them. I loved it, so relatable which made me love it even more, from the pictures to the questions and the words. And I'd celebrate but that's me.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Yaaaasss, if someone is going to treat you like that and make you cry, you don't need them. I loved it, so relatable which made me love it even more, from the pictures to the questions and the words. And I'd celebrate but that's me.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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LOL!! Loved this review! You get this totally, Mia. Thank you so much. It is a pleasure to write something and have it completely understood. I appreciate this more than you know. Thanks again. PS. I chose to celebrate. And it works for me.
Comment from Sugarray77
You have crafted a really good entry for this prompt. Your meter and rhythm flow seamlessly and convey heartfelt emotion that draws the reader in. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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You have crafted a really good entry for this prompt. Your meter and rhythm flow seamlessly and convey heartfelt emotion that draws the reader in. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Sugarray77! That was quick. I just posted this about 2 minutes ago. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this piece. I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing it. Thanks again!
