Come sit by the fire
This is a contest entry requiring 4 words2 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Well conceived use of image and also excellent balance and pace integrating the four words. A good read, and I think you will do well in the contest, thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Well conceived use of image and also excellent balance and pace integrating the four words. A good read, and I think you will do well in the contest, thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the kind words. Based on your comments, I get the feeling that you really know about poetry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job using the words as required. I like your story and the end rhymes are an added bonus. Thanks for sharing and best wises. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job using the words as required. I like your story and the end rhymes are an added bonus. Thanks for sharing and best wises. Jan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the kind words. I am old fashioned - I think poems should have some rhymes.
