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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "God, Thank You Again!"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from R.E.R.
This poem is very encouraging and well-written! I admire your faith in God, and I wish you all the best! Lovely poem and great message- all communicated nicely.
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This poem is very encouraging and well-written! I admire your faith in God, and I wish you all the best! Lovely poem and great message- all communicated nicely.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
A story of survival though the perfect grace of God. This comes across as a sincere and beautiful person who has been tested and cured due to his faithfulness. Full of praise to the Lord for healing you. Great job!
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A story of survival though the perfect grace of God. This comes across as a sincere and beautiful person who has been tested and cured due to his faithfulness. Full of praise to the Lord for healing you. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
Comment from Ozymandias504
I am glad you're good with god and seem to have survived a terrible time but I can't say this works at all for me. Its over the top. bombastic style feels heavy handed without the slightest bit of wit or poetic beauty.
The subject of god should inspire thoughts of beauty and inspiration whereas this just felt like a dirge.
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I am glad you're good with god and seem to have survived a terrible time but I can't say this works at all for me. Its over the top. bombastic style feels heavy handed without the slightest bit of wit or poetic beauty.
The subject of god should inspire thoughts of beauty and inspiration whereas this just felt like a dirge.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You speak about God's miracles and I have graced with a few in my short life:) It's nice to read about other people experiencing God's miracles. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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You speak about God's miracles and I have graced with a few in my short life:) It's nice to read about other people experiencing God's miracles. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
Comment from Dilettante junior
Great piece. It is inspirational and uplifting. I really enjoy the repetition and imperfect rhyming as you put in your notes. God indeed is great! Punctuation free give a feeling of the words and verses having a freedom of their own. Bravo!
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Great piece. It is inspirational and uplifting. I really enjoy the repetition and imperfect rhyming as you put in your notes. God indeed is great! Punctuation free give a feeling of the words and verses having a freedom of their own. Bravo!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
It sounds like the Lord was sure looking after you! It's amazing how He seems to know just when and what to do to help us. Many times I've almost died, but didn't. I praise His name! God bless you and I'm so glad you are doing well.
Patty
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It sounds like the Lord was sure looking after you! It's amazing how He seems to know just when and what to do to help us. Many times I've almost died, but didn't. I praise His name! God bless you and I'm so glad you are doing well.
Patty
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from dmt1967
If this is based on real life, I am glad you are well. I thought this was another well worded poem and I enjoyed the way it sounded. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
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If this is based on real life, I am glad you are well. I thought this was another well worded poem and I enjoyed the way it sounded. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from karenina
Your acrostic is a nod to great medical care...and to the Divine Healer (regardless of religious affiliation) who brought you under their care and who guided their skilled hands and compassionate hearts to facilitate your healing. I was an RN for 35 years... Many a patient who faced a life or death surgery came in an atheist and left believing in SOME higher power!
Karenina
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Your acrostic is a nod to great medical care...and to the Divine Healer (regardless of religious affiliation) who brought you under their care and who guided their skilled hands and compassionate hearts to facilitate your healing. I was an RN for 35 years... Many a patient who faced a life or death surgery came in an atheist and left believing in SOME higher power!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from Mastery
Vert nice but repetitive acrostic, Litt Dear. Your relationship with the creator is unique and you are fortunate to have such a closeness in mind and body. Goodm writing, my friend, once again. Bob
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Vert nice but repetitive acrostic, Litt Dear. Your relationship with the creator is unique and you are fortunate to have such a closeness in mind and body. Goodm writing, my friend, once again. Bob
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
Comment from Vanna1
Nice expressions. Great presentation. In my opinion a little too much repetition with some words and phrases. Overall it really has a lot of emotion which makes it a heart warming read. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice expressions. Great presentation. In my opinion a little too much repetition with some words and phrases. Overall it really has a lot of emotion which makes it a heart warming read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021