For God!
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "God Gives Me Everything!"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from Lobber
Hi,
You have a tremendous energy devoted to the Being who provides you with the spiritual support you need and deserve, based on your actions. Thank you for sharing. - Lobber
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Hi,
You have a tremendous energy devoted to the Being who provides you with the spiritual support you need and deserve, based on your actions. Thank you for sharing. - Lobber
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
This is a great poem. It is so true that we pray and pray but only He knows what is right for us and when. And then we get an abundance of it! It is proven time and time again in my life that He know best!
Thank you for sharing. Nicely done
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This is a great poem. It is so true that we pray and pray but only He knows what is right for us and when. And then we get an abundance of it! It is proven time and time again in my life that He know best!
Thank you for sharing. Nicely done
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Poetofheart2013
Another wonderful Praise poem and full of gratitude and love and Respect.
Your poem me really good when I was reading it. You write so beautiful words.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep the good work
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Another wonderful Praise poem and full of gratitude and love and Respect.
Your poem me really good when I was reading it. You write so beautiful words.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep the good work
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I think I'm being kind in giving you a five star review as this is not a three line poem but a seven line. A lot of punctuation is needed like full stops instead of commas. All best. Ulla
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Hi there, I think I'm being kind in giving you a five star review as this is not a three line poem but a seven line. A lot of punctuation is needed like full stops instead of commas. All best. Ulla
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. You're right. God always answers our prayers, but sometimes He doesn't give us what we prayed for. He gives what we need. Hanks for the inspiration.
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This is very good. You're right. God always answers our prayers, but sometimes He doesn't give us what we prayed for. He gives what we need. Hanks for the inspiration.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from tfawcus
Three lines that define the symbiotic relationship that you enjoy with your God and the sustenance you receive from it. A good combination of picture and poem. I'm not sure that your use of 'worth' as a verb is the best way of expressing the last line. Your decision, though.
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Three lines that define the symbiotic relationship that you enjoy with your God and the sustenance you receive from it. A good combination of picture and poem. I'm not sure that your use of 'worth' as a verb is the best way of expressing the last line. Your decision, though.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Brady Jane
I enjoyed how uplifting this poem was! I can sense how strongly you feel through the lines. Had a very imminent spiritual sense. Very enjoyable and a nice refresher from the norm.
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I enjoyed how uplifting this poem was! I can sense how strongly you feel through the lines. Had a very imminent spiritual sense. Very enjoyable and a nice refresher from the norm.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
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Thanks.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I am a bit confused as your description says "3 Line Poem" and I count 7 so if it's supposed to be three then this merits an average rating. Since I don't want to have to "do over", I'll rate based on content which is just fine. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I am a bit confused as your description says "3 Line Poem" and I count 7 so if it's supposed to be three then this merits an average rating. Since I don't want to have to "do over", I'll rate based on content which is just fine. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
truly, God does give us all we need. I am in the midst of moving and I get anxious and exhausted but I know that he is there, guiding and directing my path.
Very nicely done Al.
Blessings
Janet
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truly, God does give us all we need. I am in the midst of moving and I get anxious and exhausted but I know that he is there, guiding and directing my path.
Very nicely done Al.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
Comment from jusylee72
Well written in three lines, however I am not sure if fits the line because there are several places where you have more than one thought and it probably needs periods instead of commas. I am not sure about the rules so I didn't count off for it. Just check what it says about the rules.
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Well written in three lines, however I am not sure if fits the line because there are several places where you have more than one thought and it probably needs periods instead of commas. I am not sure about the rules so I didn't count off for it. Just check what it says about the rules.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
