Forward, Into the Light
Don't let yesterday darken your vision of tomorrow...15 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
Now this is really good. Why am I reading all these two line poems that are better than mine. Forward Into the Light is so clever. You should make a poster of it. I love adages. Yours is like a proverb. It is very wise. You made me think of a related adage, which I intend to put in my notes and use the next time this contest rolls around. Thank you for that.
Good luck in the contest. This will do well.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Now this is really good. Why am I reading all these two line poems that are better than mine. Forward Into the Light is so clever. You should make a poster of it. I love adages. Yours is like a proverb. It is very wise. You made me think of a related adage, which I intend to put in my notes and use the next time this contest rolls around. Thank you for that.
Good luck in the contest. This will do well.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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Wow! What an encouraging and detailed review! Thank you so very much!!
Comment from pome lover
gotta give you a 6 for that.
You said a mouthful in thirteen simple words. You ought to send that off to Reader'a Digest or some magazine. Maybe even the New Yorker.
Psychology R Us? just kidding. But that IS a wise thought. I like it.
pome lover
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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gotta give you a 6 for that.
You said a mouthful in thirteen simple words. You ought to send that off to Reader'a Digest or some magazine. Maybe even the New Yorker.
Psychology R Us? just kidding. But that IS a wise thought. I like it.
pome lover
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Oh, my goodness, Katharine -- thank you for this awesome review and those lovely stars! :) :)
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you're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this is a clever write and a poignant one, we dwell on our past too much at times and looking to the future and enjoying the present is the best way to live, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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He he he, this is a clever write and a poignant one, we dwell on our past too much at times and looking to the future and enjoying the present is the best way to live, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review, Dolly!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Shadow is the truth, effect, fruition, outcome, result or cause of existence leaves or reveals or goes behind performance if it is in front of you it means you are on the wrong way of failure; well said, well done. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Shadow is the truth, effect, fruition, outcome, result or cause of existence leaves or reveals or goes behind performance if it is in front of you it means you are on the wrong way of failure; well said, well done. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My many thanks for your review!!
Comment from Karen Luciana
Dear Author,
I have been reading many of the two-line poems on this site, and I think yours is the best so far. You wrote only a few words, but portrayed fine imagery and a profound message. I really like it. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing!
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Dear Author,
I have been reading many of the two-line poems on this site, and I think yours is the best so far. You wrote only a few words, but portrayed fine imagery and a profound message. I really like it. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing!
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My sincerest thanks for your wonderful comments!!
