Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Ricky, I'm glad you used the virtues of Faith, Hope and Charity in your writing. All these apply to family, and this had strains of spirituality in it, and I loved the picture too. Dove

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

As always always a pleasure to see the word of reviewing my work and you enjoy and have a blessed day as I shall to dr. Ricci 1024

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky 102424
I say you have a poem that makes one to realize that from the time of birth the child needs to be loved and as the child grow learn and it's best the child should follow the footsteps of Christ.

Gert

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019

Thanks Miss Gert.
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reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Jul-2019

You are welcome.
Gert

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019

Thanks.
Ricky

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Writer, I am providing you with five stars because I know you will go in a do some word typo corrections. your art work is a good match. your poetry flows and reflects a strong and passionate faith. Good success!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019

Cleaned it up a bit.
It was written while riding a bus to church.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I truly loved the imagery evoked by the lines which refer to life as a cake frosted with plenty. All we need to is take a bite to savor its flavor. Nicey done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019

Thanks Angel
Ricky...