"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Within the Whisper of a Child?"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautiful offering this evening, Ricky, about the wonderful and blessed gift of a child! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Human Conseption --> Human Conception
theso Naughty --> the so Naughty
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Such a beautiful offering this evening, Ricky, about the wonderful and blessed gift of a child! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Human Conseption --> Human Conception
theso Naughty --> the so Naughty
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thanks Yvonne for the corrects!
Ricky
Comment from Sheridan1
You have a number of lovely images here. I wonder if you can show the reader how your images/ideas are connected or that they do progress from your title through to the last verse. I'm guessing that the connection is your belief in Christ. But that is a wide connection and I think it could be narrowed down to part of his message. Perhaps you have the means for 2 or three beautiful poems here.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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You have a number of lovely images here. I wonder if you can show the reader how your images/ideas are connected or that they do progress from your title through to the last verse. I'm guessing that the connection is your belief in Christ. But that is a wide connection and I think it could be narrowed down to part of his message. Perhaps you have the means for 2 or three beautiful poems here.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thanks but Unfortunately Unnecessary.
Doctor Ricky 1024