Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I smiled at your comment about taking lessons from Dean. I was reminded of the movie, "Rosemary's Baby." I was too young when I saw the movie to make sense of it but it was scary!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

I think I've never seen it.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no more stars to give Now this one really got to me I vision going through that giving birth.... that devil and his imps pops up any place
thank you for sharing this wild story
cookie

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks, Cookie. Hugs.

reply by misscookie on 01-Jul-2019

Your very welcome have a blessed day
cookie

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I don't think you need any classes at all! This fits a horror story very well. I don't have any suggestions and the best of luck in the contest. It's a worthy entry.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I must admit I really loved this post. I don't think one should make deals with the devil, he's a little treacherous, he hates us as much as he hates God, we are just a little easier to deceive. Beautifully written Maria, just loved this, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

reply by royowen on 01-Jul-2019

Well done

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, what a great story Maria, you sell your soul to the devil and you will never win! Faust did it and look where it got him! I enjoyed your entertaining story Maris, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks, Dolly.xxx

Comment from doggymad1

Excellent

This one sure was creepy. I was hoping for a medical mystery or miracle. I forgot that you are adept at leading us up the proverbial garden path.

Well done and best of luck in the contest with this one

hugs
Freda

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Freda. xxx

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

MJ,

Hmmm.. I think Dean will be pleased at this first effort. *smile* And... yuck!

I would have to caution that girl to never get into an agreement with anyone -- ANYONE unless she reads the fine print. Bad idea.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks, Robyn.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh yes, the beginning was habit forming, then to the wonderment of the middle, then to the absolute horror of the closing. You have it all and it was great

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks, Barb.

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You had me captivated from the very first word and held my interest throughout. The story progressed smoothly and I had no idea where you were going with it. Best of wishes in the contest! Also, very interesting picture!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks for your review and for the generous rating.

reply by fm wright on 01-Jul-2019

You are very welcome!

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely as it contains all the necessary elements to convey horror to the reader. I know how you feel trying this genre as it is not my thing either. I applaud you for stepping out in an effort to grow! Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

---

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for your review. Have a lovely day.