Reviews from
short poem
2 total reviews
Comment from
Darlene Franklin
Oh, how lovely. No matter how fevered our prayer, how much we strive and stumble (great alliteration), without faith, we're pretty much saying empty words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
Exactly, thanks for the insightful review Darlene.
Comment from
Cybertron1986
Deep, philosophical, and poetic. This piece conveys a diversity of emotions. Your choice of words is exquisite and well deserving of a high rating. The implication of what "whispered sighs" at the end really got my attention. Beautiful
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
Thanks for the insightful review and shiny stars. There is solace there and many find comfort in prayer. Cheers.
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