Forever Yours
A '12 Word Poetry Contest' Offering19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twelve word poem about love and the one who owns our heart is looking after us like we are a precious jewel that cannot be disgarded at any time.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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A very well-written twelve word poem about love and the one who owns our heart is looking after us like we are a precious jewel that cannot be disgarded at any time.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear,
I love the impact of 'owned' used in such a profoundly visual
and visceral imagery, of a life saving event for the heart, without
all the romantic semantics that usually capture and captivate
one's feeling of belongin. This is the ideal effect and lasting
kind of love/relationship. Unique and heartfully inspiring indeed.
Thanks for sharing dear! Best of luck in contest!
Blessings, best wishes always, Ronni
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hi dear,
I love the impact of 'owned' used in such a profoundly visual
and visceral imagery, of a life saving event for the heart, without
all the romantic semantics that usually capture and captivate
one's feeling of belongin. This is the ideal effect and lasting
kind of love/relationship. Unique and heartfully inspiring indeed.
Thanks for sharing dear! Best of luck in contest!
Blessings, best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Oh, Ronnie!! Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments!! ;)
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Powerful! I especially liked this. You can really feel the intensity of feeling in this piece. I like the picture choice as well. The bold bright colors enhance this work. Thank you for sharing this. Good work!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Powerful! I especially liked this. You can really feel the intensity of feeling in this piece. I like the picture choice as well. The bold bright colors enhance this work. Thank you for sharing this. Good work!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments!! ;)
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awesome sentiment you present in this. Very well done with the limited contest structure! What a blessing to be the person whose heart has been saved! Great work! Good luck in your contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Awesome sentiment you present in this. Very well done with the limited contest structure! What a blessing to be the person whose heart has been saved! Great work! Good luck in your contest!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments!! ;)
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You are so welcome! A pleasure to read!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent twelve word poem for the contest.
There is big difference between capturing and saving.
I think saving is by far the best. Well said.
Excellent art work to match your words
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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You've written an excellent twelve word poem for the contest.
There is big difference between capturing and saving.
I think saving is by far the best. Well said.
Excellent art work to match your words
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from pome lover
I know you didn't mean it this way, but it immediately reminded me of either a book I read or a movie of someplace where if a person saved another, he owned the person he saved, whether he wanted to or not. So goeth your heart. I'm just kidding you.
That's a sweet poem. And if it's you, I hope the the captor is worthy.
Lovely, selfless thought.
pome lover
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I know you didn't mean it this way, but it immediately reminded me of either a book I read or a movie of someplace where if a person saved another, he owned the person he saved, whether he wanted to or not. So goeth your heart. I'm just kidding you.
That's a sweet poem. And if it's you, I hope the the captor is worthy.
Lovely, selfless thought.
pome lover
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Wow...okay, leave it to you -- lol!!! Thanks for the review and the smile for the evening!!
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dying to know who you are. :)
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Just hang on 'til tomorrow evening!! ;)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. That is a very nice poem and the resolution of the poem is very different from most romantic poems. I like the difference in your poem. It was very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hello mystery writer. That is a very nice poem and the resolution of the poem is very different from most romantic poems. I like the difference in your poem. It was very well done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
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you're welcome.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your beautiful candid poem and selected picture! Your words tell a far larger story, which I admired. Excellent writing and entry to the 12 word contest!
My best in your success!
Deborah
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your beautiful candid poem and selected picture! Your words tell a far larger story, which I admired. Excellent writing and entry to the 12 word contest!
My best in your success!
Deborah
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
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Welcome :)
Comment from Raul1
This is a very romantic poem. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This is a very romantic poem. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review!
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You're welcome! :)
