Forever Yours
A '12 Word Poetry Contest' Offering19 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your words in this profound statement, which movingly conveys the theme that love has the power
to rescue a person.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your words in this profound statement, which movingly conveys the theme that love has the power
to rescue a person.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Many thanks for your review today!
Comment from victor 66
These twelve words are very nicely stated and bring home what I would like to think true love really is. I'd also like to think that your poem gives hope to people who are still looking for that special someone. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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These twelve words are very nicely stated and bring home what I would like to think true love really is. I'd also like to think that your poem gives hope to people who are still looking for that special someone. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Wow, Victor -- such a wonderful review...so glad my poem touched you!! And, yes, I too would like to believe it provides hope to the searchers out there -- just the fact that you think it may makes me feel as though I accomplished something today!! Thank you for your encouraging comments!
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Well, mystery writer... It's easy to write a positive review on a poem is so good. You're welcome.
Comment from rama devi
I can see why this one is winning the contest. Very clever AHA in that last line. Great theme. Witty satire yet high emotional pitch. Great presentation. Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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I can see why this one is winning the contest. Very clever AHA in that last line. Great theme. Witty satire yet high emotional pitch. Great presentation. Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a lovely and warming review, rama -- so very appreciated!!
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Congrats on your placement in the contest! :-)
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Thank you! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your words here and they captured my heart, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a winner for me, fine words, best wishes . . . . . Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed your words here and they captured my heart, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a winner for me, fine words, best wishes . . . . . Love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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So glad I was able to touch your heart, Dolly -- thank you so much for this wonderful review!!
Comment from WryWriter
What a tribute poetic work to someone who captures the heart so that the one being captured views it to be the salvation of the heart! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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What a tribute poetic work to someone who captures the heart so that the one being captured views it to be the salvation of the heart! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review - much appreciated!!
Comment from Six-Star Writer
You obeyed the twelve words rule. You used English words. They speak of things that have been spoken of many times before. They follow each other in large, yellow font. This appears to be a poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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You obeyed the twelve words rule. You used English words. They speak of things that have been spoken of many times before. They follow each other in large, yellow font. This appears to be a poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Pen Pal: love is key. Your artwork is amazing.
I pray that the politicians learn to love one another
and work together. God is love and loved us first.
Your poem can be a message for many ideas to
the world. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Pen Pal: love is key. Your artwork is amazing.
I pray that the politicians learn to love one another
and work together. God is love and loved us first.
Your poem can be a message for many ideas to
the world. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Oh, I am so very glad this touched you like this! And thank you so very much for your awesome review!!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is such a beautiful 12 word poetry contest entry. I loved your words, starting with 'owned', which you further defined as not because the heart was captured, but because it was saved.
I really like 'owned' being in the larger font, making it stand out.
The font color (and gorgeous style), with your beautiful blue background choice, complement the artwork exceptionally well.
A great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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This is such a beautiful 12 word poetry contest entry. I loved your words, starting with 'owned', which you further defined as not because the heart was captured, but because it was saved.
I really like 'owned' being in the larger font, making it stand out.
The font color (and gorgeous style), with your beautiful blue background choice, complement the artwork exceptionally well.
A great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderfully detailed comments, Gale, and for the lovely review!! So glad my words touched you!
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They most certainly did.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your 12 word contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture is a nice pairing with your heart-felt words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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You did a great job with your 12 word contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture is a nice pairing with your heart-felt words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I'm going to print this out and give it to my husband --embroidered on a pillow-- because this message hits home with my relationship with him SO very perfectly. Next month is the 20th anniversary of our first date, and you will be there, helping to make it special. Thank you for that. And best of luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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I'm going to print this out and give it to my husband --embroidered on a pillow-- because this message hits home with my relationship with him SO very perfectly. Next month is the 20th anniversary of our first date, and you will be there, helping to make it special. Thank you for that. And best of luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Hooray!! I'm gonna be on a pillow...LOL! :) No, seriously, just joking -- but, please, feel free to embroider away! ;) So very glad you enjoyed and Congrats!! Our 'first date anniv' is Feb 16! ;) ;)
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Oooh! Right after Valentine's Day! Very nice. How many years? xo
