The Kitten Drug
12 Word Poetry Contest Entry18 total reviews
Comment from john mallahan
Ah yes, as it is! We had a kitty once who flagooned the garden, wandering into the spaces where, as he aged, more shade was provided. Always the pervayer of all tho. The legend of the garden. Minx in the midst. Feline, stalking...
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Ah yes, as it is! We had a kitty once who flagooned the garden, wandering into the spaces where, as he aged, more shade was provided. Always the pervayer of all tho. The legend of the garden. Minx in the midst. Feline, stalking...
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, John. I must say, this is quite the unique review. I appreciate your time. Glad you liked it!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Yes, I was addicted at a very young age! Six great pairs of words to describe why we love them so. And the picture! Now, there's an addicting (and addicted?) kitten. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Yes, I was addicted at a very young age! Six great pairs of words to describe why we love them so. And the picture! Now, there's an addicting (and addicted?) kitten. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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LOL!! I love addicting and addicted kitten! Thank you Darlene for taking the time to read and review this. Lovely comments. Much appreciated!!
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You're welcome, and thank you for your poem.
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It was such an unusual picture, but perfect for the poem.
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Sometimes I go to picture sites and put in "digital" in the search. The results are very different. That's how I found this baby. I didn't have any idea what to write about until I found this kitten. Then it was easy. Loved your review. Thanks!
Comment from WryWriter
The poem and artwork are hypnotizing! Love your use of adverbs and ing ers!! Perfect color choices also. Good luck in the contest! Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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The poem and artwork are hypnotizing! Love your use of adverbs and ing ers!! Perfect color choices also. Good luck in the contest! Enjoyed!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Thank you! So glad you liked this. After I saw this little guy the rest fell into place. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing this piece. Lovely comments! Thank you.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Pen Pal: great words describing that cute, adorable, kitten.
We love cats. They are wonderful therapy and puurrr friends.
My daughter rescued a cat from the grocery store. We named
her Sunshine, name of store. We got several cats we rescued.
Now, I have four cats. I'm sure you have cats, too. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Pen Pal: great words describing that cute, adorable, kitten.
We love cats. They are wonderful therapy and puurrr friends.
My daughter rescued a cat from the grocery store. We named
her Sunshine, name of store. We got several cats we rescued.
Now, I have four cats. I'm sure you have cats, too. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you! Love your profile name, by the way. No, no kitties here. But, thinking about it. Maybe it's time to bring another little fur ball into my life. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I enjoyed writing this. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review this. Yes, rescued animals are the best. I loved that you named yours after the grocery store. Awesome. Lovely comments. Thank you!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What an adorable presentation. I love the whole package ... title, artwork, color scheme, font and font color; all the 'ing' words describing the 'kitten drug' ... catnip maybe? The kitten certainly appears to be in a drug-induced realm of contentment, peace, happiness (LOL).
OR: this could be simply loving kittens for the adorable critters they are :)
Either way, it had me pondering, and that's always a good thing.
This is an adorable poem. I wish you the very best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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What an adorable presentation. I love the whole package ... title, artwork, color scheme, font and font color; all the 'ing' words describing the 'kitten drug' ... catnip maybe? The kitten certainly appears to be in a drug-induced realm of contentment, peace, happiness (LOL).
OR: this could be simply loving kittens for the adorable critters they are :)
Either way, it had me pondering, and that's always a good thing.
This is an adorable poem. I wish you the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Gale, for this lovely review! I think it's a bit of both. Is there anything more wonderful than picking one up and listening to them purr?? I appreciate your comments and your time to read this. I'm glad you liked it.
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I want another cat :( My 16 year old cat had to be put down last year (kidney failure). I sure do miss her.
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I think that's the reason I was lured to this kitten. I have the same experience as you. I think if you are ready then adopt a kitten. I'm almost ready to do that. Let me know what you decide. I'd be very interested. Even though this is blind we already know each other. Heh-heh. LOL
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I'm seriously contemplating :) I just have to convince my husband and his dog (LOL).
I really loved your poem, by the way :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This is all true about a kitten or a baby of any species. I like the use of only adverbs and adjectives.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
~dragonpoet
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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This is all true about a kitten or a baby of any species. I like the use of only adverbs and adjectives.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
~dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you DP! You are the only one who noticed the adverbs and adjectives in this piece. Wow! That is so much appreciated. I'm glad you liked this and I'm also glad you remember and apply your grade school parts of speech lessons! Thank you again!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all twelve vivid words in this piece.
When I was a teacher looking at catalogs for posters, I was pleasantly surprised at how many featured kittens. They are wonderful creatures.
Great tribute to them!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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You have made excellent use of all twelve vivid words in this piece.
When I was a teacher looking at catalogs for posters, I was pleasantly surprised at how many featured kittens. They are wonderful creatures.
Great tribute to them!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Janice! I remember those posters. I'm so glad you liked this. It was fun to write. I appreciate your comments and you taking the time to review this piece. Thanks!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a cutie and such great words to describe perfectly this precious little fur baby. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I can envision every word appropriately used to for this little kitty. Great job nd thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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What a cutie and such great words to describe perfectly this precious little fur baby. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I can envision every word appropriately used to for this little kitty. Great job nd thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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"Fur baby.." Absolutely. Thank you, Jan, for this great review. I loved your comments and I appreciate them very much. I'm glad you liked this.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautifully written and your picture is completely adorable. I am a cat person and you have described how I see them perfectly especially the little ones! I love their joyful play and awkward adventuring! Great job!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Beautifully written and your picture is completely adorable. I am a cat person and you have described how I see them perfectly especially the little ones! I love their joyful play and awkward adventuring! Great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Diana! I love your "awkward adventuring"! I was trying to figure out how to add that quality to them. But by that time I had already used up my 12 words. This is a lovely review and I thank you.
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Well you did an awesome job no matter! And you are very welcome! It was most enjoyable!
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Shhh! I voted for yours because even though some are romantic and some touching drama, I felt yours was the most uniquely done! Sometimes the same old thing can get a little boring!
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Ha! Ha! You are cracking me up this afternoon. Why thank you!!!
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LoL!!! :) xo
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Can't wait for the big reveal. You're going to love it.
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Me tooo! It?s so hard to wait and find out who the beautiful poets are behind the character they use to represent ?blind?! I mean where did they come up with that drawing! Haha!
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I won't spoil it. Suffice it to say we are recent fans of each other. I enjoy you very much. I predict many messages of bitching about men. LOL!!!!
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LoL! Oh the intrigue & mystery!
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HaHaHa!!! You're fun!! LMAO!!!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your contest entry and I have to admit my bias as a lover of kittens! Also, I agree, they are all six of your poems verses and this is a great use of your 12 words!
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your contest entry and I have to admit my bias as a lover of kittens! Also, I agree, they are all six of your poems verses and this is a great use of your 12 words!
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Deb. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Kittens pretty much melt me inside so this was fun to write. I appreciate your review. Lovely comments. Thanks.
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You are welcome :)!
