Old Glory
Be proud America5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on Third Place! :)A wonderful offering, Willie -- loved your focus on the pride in country that Ol' Glory still incites! ;) ;) I am so very thankful for your joining in the 'Fourth Fun'!! ;) :) Take care and Happy Fourth of July! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Congrats on Third Place! :)A wonderful offering, Willie -- loved your focus on the pride in country that Ol' Glory still incites! ;) ;) I am so very thankful for your joining in the 'Fourth Fun'!! ;) :) Take care and Happy Fourth of July! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you Yvette, you are very kind. Thanks for your review and stars.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Awesome job on this four-stacked 5-7-5, Mystery Poet. You did a really excellent job, and even did it with rhymes! I like this entry very much. Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Awesome job on this four-stacked 5-7-5, Mystery Poet. You did a really excellent job, and even did it with rhymes! I like this entry very much. Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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done, thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This reminds us the need of standing up and to feel proud of becoming an American keeping promise to revive our old glory high; enjoyed the read, well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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This reminds us the need of standing up and to feel proud of becoming an American keeping promise to revive our old glory high; enjoyed the read, well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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We live in troubled times in our great country, but I believe patriotic
Americans will see us through. I appreciate your review and stars.
Comment from judiverse
Oops! By reading the directions carefully, you'll find the rules call for FOUR of these little 5-7-5 poems. You've a good beginning, and you still have plenty of time to comply with the instructions by adding three more. Beautiful artwork, and I'm glad you emphasize being proud. So many people act like they aren't. Just add those other stanzas, and good luck! judi
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Oops! By reading the directions carefully, you'll find the rules call for FOUR of these little 5-7-5 poems. You've a good beginning, and you still have plenty of time to comply with the instructions by adding three more. Beautiful artwork, and I'm glad you emphasize being proud. So many people act like they aren't. Just add those other stanzas, and good luck! judi
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks, done.
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I'm glad you got to it in time for the contest.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You are off to a good start with the FIRST stanza having the correct theme, line and syllable count. The contest requires a total of four of these in a stacked format that combine into a cohesive poem so you have some work to do before the CEC gets to it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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You are off to a good start with the FIRST stanza having the correct theme, line and syllable count. The contest requires a total of four of these in a stacked format that combine into a cohesive poem so you have some work to do before the CEC gets to it. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you, been changed.
