I Didn't Know
A rock ballad for either a male or a female lead...34 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Force
Really! The southern bell has been rung?:-) Great song. Sorry I didn't get to this one sooner really been lax over the last few weeks. Congratulations well deserved. Just one !?!? (Room'd)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Really! The southern bell has been rung?:-) Great song. Sorry I didn't get to this one sooner really been lax over the last few weeks. Congratulations well deserved. Just one !?!? (Room'd)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hey, there! Good to have you back in the swing again! ;) ;) Thanx for dropping in on this one....it was fun!! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
This is really good, Yvette. I hear Van Morrison doing this and, of course, there is a guitar solo. ,+) Beautiful, romantic and soulful. I suppose this is your husband, the one you cannot walk away from. That good, I can't either.
All my best and in the contest. I hope I get to vote.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This is really good, Yvette. I hear Van Morrison doing this and, of course, there is a guitar solo. ,+) Beautiful, romantic and soulful. I suppose this is your husband, the one you cannot walk away from. That good, I can't either.
All my best and in the contest. I hope I get to vote.
Sal xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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You already missed the contest, Lady Sal -- but that's okay cuz you're catching the rays for all of us (including some for me, I hope!!). But, oh-yeah, I could hear Van take a stab at this one...! ;) ;) Thanx for your review, ma'am .... so glad you enjoyed (and that you're havin' a good time with the Jax-man! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I thought this was really s creative romance work. Good rhyme. Sensual and sexy message. Well written. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I thought this was really s creative romance work. Good rhyme. Sensual and sexy message. Well written. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Yeah, the crazy blonde does songwriting sometimes, too! ;) ;) Thanx for the review, Lance, and you be sure to have a wonderful weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sankey
This was good. Great poem and the artwork is good as well. If I can get my Encore music programme working might have a go at a tune for ya. Might take some time yet though too many other projects on atm. Hope you check my autobiography, sorry no rewards. (Little Dog)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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This was good. Great poem and the artwork is good as well. If I can get my Encore music programme working might have a go at a tune for ya. Might take some time yet though too many other projects on atm. Hope you check my autobiography, sorry no rewards. (Little Dog)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Oh, yeah, do I get the 'many other projects'!! :) ;) Since summer is the teacher's vacation, that means that summer is the only time I have to do any projects and there's also summer class planning for the coming year and catching up with the house stuff and this summer all three of my sons graduated at different levels so I'm busy with lots of follow-up....... yeah, 'vacation' is a vague term for me!! :) :) But I'm glad you popped in on this one sir -- thank you! :) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
You were a groupie when you was a teenager, Yvette. :) I can tell by the music you pen so well. I couldn't get the rhythm until I started playing air guitar. This is a good entry for the Lyrical Poem contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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You were a groupie when you was a teenager, Yvette. :) I can tell by the music you pen so well. I couldn't get the rhythm until I started playing air guitar. This is a good entry for the Lyrical Poem contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Oh my goodness -- that is awesome!! You were playing guitar to my song!! Soooo, I am now your biggest fan, Jose!! ;) ;) Thanx so much for that wonderful smile and spectacular way to start my morning! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from JanPerry
A bright, colourful setting describing your love with the guy. The chorus is pretty, don't enjoy the use of your references to "brow". It's like the whole song is centred around a brow?
The rest is well suited to the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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A bright, colourful setting describing your love with the guy. The chorus is pretty, don't enjoy the use of your references to "brow". It's like the whole song is centred around a brow?
The rest is well suited to the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Jan -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Songs are always a fun one for me as I can 'hear' the music (and the voice!) in my head... take care! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from royowen
As a songwriter I would normally just write "Chorus" after each verse, the chords and the words don't change, and it saves space on sheets. (Makes a difference if one is reading one sheet or three on a music stand. (Just a suggestion.) Yvette, but you've thought this out, if one changes even one syllable in a verse, it changes the notation in the verse. But well done dear Yvette. Most of the old hymns where written, to 8686 (Amazing grace) meter or 8888, although music can be more flexible than poetry. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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As a songwriter I would normally just write "Chorus" after each verse, the chords and the words don't change, and it saves space on sheets. (Makes a difference if one is reading one sheet or three on a music stand. (Just a suggestion.) Yvette, but you've thought this out, if one changes even one syllable in a verse, it changes the notation in the verse. But well done dear Yvette. Most of the old hymns where written, to 8686 (Amazing grace) meter or 8888, although music can be more flexible than poetry. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Yeah... didn't write the "Chorus" because of the subtle changes I put in each one... :) ;) Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Roy -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Songs are always a fun one for me as I can 'hear' the music (and the voice!) in my head... take care! ;) ;) Yvette :)
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A chorus is a chorus because of it's sameness, notation is repetitive, "we all drink Coke because it's so nice"
Comment from karenina
Hey! There's this show on TV called "Songland" (I think that's the name"--all about new song writers competing against one another to have their song chosen by a "star" to sing. You could enter this! I just jammed out my own melody in my own head and it worked very nicely! Rock on you!--Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Hey! There's this show on TV called "Songland" (I think that's the name"--all about new song writers competing against one another to have their song chosen by a "star" to sing. You could enter this! I just jammed out my own melody in my own head and it worked very nicely! Rock on you!--Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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LOL! You know, I'll let you in on a secret (don't tell anybody): songwriting was my first love back when I was a teen! :) But, that certainly doesn't pay as much as Physics and I was way too smart to be a writer! (this my dad beat me over the head with...not physically, of course!! LOL!) But I'm glad you enjoyed it...I think it's why my brain tends to try to find the 'melody' to poems as I read or write them... :) ;) Thanx and take care out there, Lady Karenina!! ;) ;) Yvette
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I agree physics likely pays much more money...but how great you get to sate your hunger to write poems and songs as well!--Karenina
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Bravo! A true hit. It is such a very romantic song and very touching. You certainly lucked out if he's the man you married and you can tell him every day. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Bravo! A true hit. It is such a very romantic song and very touching. You certainly lucked out if he's the man you married and you can tell him every day. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Raffaelina -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Songs are always a fun one for me as I can 'hear' the music (and the voice!) in my head... take care out there, ma'am! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Loren .
For what ever reason, I can envision and hear Dolly Parton singing this one. :) It's obvious that a lot of emotions went into this creation, universal thoughts and passions familiar to us all ... at one time of another. And here you said you were no poet. This, i think, is proof enough you might have been mistaken. Loren
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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For what ever reason, I can envision and hear Dolly Parton singing this one. :) It's obvious that a lot of emotions went into this creation, universal thoughts and passions familiar to us all ... at one time of another. And here you said you were no poet. This, i think, is proof enough you might have been mistaken. Loren
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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You can make it whatever genre you like, sir -- and, yeah, I could hear Dolly but I would much rather hear George Strait, but that's just a personal preference... always loved that deep, smooth, seductive voice of his!! :) :) Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Loren -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Songs are always a fun one for me as I can 'hear' the music (and the voice!) in my head... take care! ;) ;) Yvette :)
