gently worn
a faith poem.7 total reviews
Comment from Nancy Slover
Judester, I love this poem! I love that you said so very much in just a few words. I can feel the peace of the moment as she closes her Bible and turns off the light. You did a great job! Congratulations!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
Judester, I love this poem! I love that you said so very much in just a few words. I can feel the peace of the moment as she closes her Bible and turns off the light. You did a great job! Congratulations!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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My mom's bible is worn smooth. It makes me happy that she finds such comfort. Thanks for the encouraging review Nancy, cheers, j
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Excellent poem. I like how you crafted a wonderful poem on the benefits of reading the bible daily. It does help calm fear and chases away stress. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
Excellent poem. I like how you crafted a wonderful poem on the benefits of reading the bible daily. It does help calm fear and chases away stress. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review Maria. I realize that we all need something to believe in, if not God, then ourselves. I appreciate the comfort people find in the bible. Cheers.
Comment from moongirlwriter
So very nice. Well-written, all three stanzas with each one addressing where we can find help to calm the seas of doubt. The very best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
So very nice. Well-written, all three stanzas with each one addressing where we can find help to calm the seas of doubt. The very best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review and sparkly stars. The comfort people find in the bible is heartwarming and I know it comforts them in times of hardship. A well worn bible is testament to their faith, cheers
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Comment from zanya
It's a powerful yet gentle statement of the reality that is a living expression of real and meaningful Faith lived out in the 'daily grind'. Well done !
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
It's a powerful yet gentle statement of the reality that is a living expression of real and meaningful Faith lived out in the 'daily grind'. Well done !
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review and sparkly stars. There is a strength having faith, a prayer to comfort when we need clarity. Cheers.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful faithful write to soothe the soul and uplift the spirit and bring calm to otherwise chaotic lives, I enjoyed your faith poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
This is a wonderful faithful write to soothe the soul and uplift the spirit and bring calm to otherwise chaotic lives, I enjoyed your faith poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the concise review Dolly. I know my mom finds solace with the bible. We all need something to believe in, to console us. Cheers,
Comment from babykoala
A simple yet very effective poem using strong imagery to portray the symbol of the bible. I really enjoyed reading this and felt very comforted by it.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
A simple yet very effective poem using strong imagery to portray the symbol of the bible. I really enjoyed reading this and felt very comforted by it.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the thoughtful review, baby koala. So important to have something to believe in, if not God, then ourselves. Something. Cheers,
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Yep. I really, really like this poem. I don't think I have seen another one like this - about that all-important giver of faith and comfort, our Bible. Great subject and great execution. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
Dear Mystery Poet,
Yep. I really, really like this poem. I don't think I have seen another one like this - about that all-important giver of faith and comfort, our Bible. Great subject and great execution. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I begin to realize that we must have faith, something to guide. Cheers.