There, Where Horses Run Wild
Escaping to a place in the mind5 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ! I gave you your first ( of many I'm sure) vote.
This entry is s tear-jerker. I don't think anyone can read this beautiful tribute to your father without feeling a tug at the heart..
Your poem has a special meaning to me.
My father died away from his birthplace and I know he will find true peace only if he is returned to his mountains and vineyards.
I will do my best to make that happen even if that means fighting with my brotherand family.
Your words have meaning and flow like a gentle stream.
Usually, I give my vote for a contest entry then review and give it five stars ....
.....in this case though , I would not be giving your outstanding poem justice if I didn't give it six stars.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Ciao ! I gave you your first ( of many I'm sure) vote.
This entry is s tear-jerker. I don't think anyone can read this beautiful tribute to your father without feeling a tug at the heart..
Your poem has a special meaning to me.
My father died away from his birthplace and I know he will find true peace only if he is returned to his mountains and vineyards.
I will do my best to make that happen even if that means fighting with my brotherand family.
Your words have meaning and flow like a gentle stream.
Usually, I give my vote for a contest entry then review and give it five stars ....
.....in this case though , I would not be giving your outstanding poem justice if I didn't give it six stars.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am overwhelmed by the stars and the review!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I give this amazing poem six stars. You have mastered the art of poetry
with this one. The rhyme and sentiment make this poem a winner in my book. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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I give this amazing poem six stars. You have mastered the art of poetry
with this one. The rhyme and sentiment make this poem a winner in my book. Excellent work.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am truly overwhelmed by the stars and your your review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very well rounded lyrics. With each stanza the man's life fades a bit until he has passed away. The rhyme and rhythm is extremely good. When he passes away at the end your closing verse was good. Also, I love the picture!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Very well rounded lyrics. With each stanza the man's life fades a bit until he has passed away. The rhyme and rhythm is extremely good. When he passes away at the end your closing verse was good. Also, I love the picture!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the review and comments!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Very nicely done, great rhyme and flow. A memorial to a loved father. The picture is great. I like the red, goes great with the picture, but it is a bit hard to read, you could maybe 'bold' the font and that would take care of that. I saw no errors. Well done and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Very nicely done, great rhyme and flow. A memorial to a loved father. The picture is great. I like the red, goes great with the picture, but it is a bit hard to read, you could maybe 'bold' the font and that would take care of that. I saw no errors. Well done and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Appreciate the review and the suggestion. Will change it right away.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, my, what a poignant story about you and your father. I'd have to hear the music to appreciate it fully, but where, take me to where the horses run wild!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Oh, my, what a poignant story about you and your father. I'd have to hear the music to appreciate it fully, but where, take me to where the horses run wild!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I appreciate the review and your kind comments. It doesn't have any melody to it yet.
