Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Ricky, What a comparison of blood to marinara sauce! Have you ever been feeling homicidal? Or I think you were suicidal inthis poem. It sounds like it was a little of both. Dove

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Suicidal?
Wrote a book entitled
"Suicidal Intentions"
As for the Subject.
Of "Homicidal Intentions?"
"Triple Suicide Dance!
December 1st, 2006.
Three years after her Suicide.
(My Wife Carolyn)
As for Me?
Let's Just say a serated 7 inch knife to my heart Twice?
(Besides other things that day)
You can take The Knife out of The Poet of Laureate's Heart...
But as For the Words?
Trapped in The Soul?
Thanks!
And do as I did...
If you anybody contemplating Suicide...
9-11 is but a second away..
Rick

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

Oh my goodness....this was quite a gruesome offering for the evening that really leaves the reader with a uneasy feeling... killing and guts and .... just a bit much, I guess.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019

Once in a while
The Darkside.
Needs to breathe?
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I can't wait since you are on such a role - hope you didn't use up BOTH of your posts for today by sending out this bit of a cliff-hanger to tempt us. Clever idea and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019

It awaits this Angel.
Don't eat first!
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