Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Beauty of Fall"Colors of each of the 4
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Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like this poem about Fall and the beautiful photo shown. Amazing, the season always brings out the colors of the foliage and the smile on one's face. Indeed, beautifully written.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I like this poem about Fall and the beautiful photo shown. Amazing, the season always brings out the colors of the foliage and the smile on one's face. Indeed, beautifully written.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Welcome to my FS nook! Nature is a great way to enjoy the outdoors. Thank you for reviewing, stop in again sometime,
Hugs Ttrisha
Comment from Nicole Hawley
This would have definitely been a challenge for me. I love that we challenge ourselves to tell stories in such few words. Not my favorite season because of what follows, but very nicely penned.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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This would have definitely been a challenge for me. I love that we challenge ourselves to tell stories in such few words. Not my favorite season because of what follows, but very nicely penned.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Each season has its own beauty. If I get discontented. I try to see that.
Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from royowen
Thisvisvhow excellent entry in this 1/5/7 poetry contest my friend, oh yes indeed, even though the trees shared their leaves in this fortuitous time, the glorious colours of Autumn suggest something other than death, such is the glory of Autumn, well done, good luck,blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thisvisvhow excellent entry in this 1/5/7 poetry contest my friend, oh yes indeed, even though the trees shared their leaves in this fortuitous time, the glorious colours of Autumn suggest something other than death, such is the glory of Autumn, well done, good luck,blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your complimentary review. God provides beauty in every season.
Hugs, Trisha
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Welcome Trisha
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I love fall, it is my favorite time of year. Here in FL we don't see the color change but we do get a temp change and it's lovely. I was in Atlanta last year and the colors there were beautiful. Well done. You got a lot across with few words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I love fall, it is my favorite time of year. Here in FL we don't see the color change but we do get a temp change and it's lovely. I was in Atlanta last year and the colors there were beautiful. Well done. You got a lot across with few words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Hi Roxanna, I used to live in the New England area. There is nothing like the colors there in the fall. I?m g,af you liked my poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. Your well chosen use of the syllables allotted paint a vivid picture for the reader's enjoyment. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. Your well chosen use of the syllables allotted paint a vivid picture for the reader's enjoyment. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for your positive review. I?m happy you enjoyed my poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Reading you I am starting to get the jest of this poetry writing, This defines fall beautifully and is a perfect match for the picture. Keep teaching I keep learning.
Rikki:)xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Reading you I am starting to get the jest of this poetry writing, This defines fall beautifully and is a perfect match for the picture. Keep teaching I keep learning.
Rikki:)xo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Then we have a FS connection! Thank you for your positive review. I?m happy you enjoyed my poem
Hugs, Trisha
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You are Welcome.
Rikki:)xo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you are on a roll this week, Trisha!! ;) This is just an AWESOME offering for the contest -- as a package (pic-n-poem) this is just perfect as there so much double meaning and wonder! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Oh, you are on a roll this week, Trisha!! ;) This is just an AWESOME offering for the contest -- as a package (pic-n-poem) this is just perfect as there so much double meaning and wonder! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hi bubbly, positive Yvette, Thank you for your continuing support of my penning.. I get so far behind with reviewing, and I am retired!
Have a great weekend,
hugs, Trisha
Comment from RodG
I really like what you are trying to convey here in but thirteen syllables, but somehow the real THEME does not quite come through for me. The beauty is IN the hues of the changing leaves. But what else does the Speaker find integrated?
May I suggest the word SADNESS? Certainly what I feel when summer ends.
Rod
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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I really like what you are trying to convey here in but thirteen syllables, but somehow the real THEME does not quite come through for me. The beauty is IN the hues of the changing leaves. But what else does the Speaker find integrated?
May I suggest the word SADNESS? Certainly what I feel when summer ends.
Rod
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Rod, I respect your opinion. I think it was more the beauty of both the young model girl, AND the leaves. We each have our own opinion, thank you for your and a kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ben Colder
Most assuredly poet. Love the thought of Fall, my favorite time of year. Leave co colorful and trees readying for winter. Good contest piece. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Most assuredly poet. Love the thought of Fall, my favorite time of year. Leave co colorful and trees readying for winter. Good contest piece. Hope you win.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Ben, I love Fall too, it?s especially lovely in New England where we lived before. Thank you for your positive review. I?m happy you enjoyed my poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and beautiful 1-5-7 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words with a very cute picture to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This is a very well written and beautiful 1-5-7 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words with a very cute picture to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Teri, thank you for your positive review. I?m happy you enjoyed my poem
Hugs, Trisha
